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Seventh Sin
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The mirror loomed over them as they traversed the hallways of the abandoned mansion. It was rumoured that no one came out alive from it...
Seven college friends from University Of Technology at Kanpur including three boys named as Kantilal, Pankh and Tanu with their four classmate girls known as Gila, Hasi, Tiha & Fiza as a traveling group toured together towards a lesser popular trip spot in a forest area at Kandla called "Seventh Sin".
As they approached their theme destination with no one available out there on foot because far long away at rural roadside it was clearly indicated by auto rickshaw driver as 'No more travel - it's prohibited to tour inside', All seven friends found a bigger rock on which this message was written with blooded flash -
GO INTERIOR AT ALVIDA...........
Gila smiled lightly and murmured "Rainfall is thick in this tourist place".
It was a new year day on first January even cold waves were better than ocean's disturbances as mid winter season in India.
"Where is my palace" said Tiha in a loud voice.
As they reached nearby seventh sin building, five wild dogs without head started barking and jumping on them while dangerous ghostly sounds were asking the reason for such advancement and with pitched language lacking hearable sense "you're not going to remain alive - yours life ends here".
Kantilal who had a shotgun in his hand hunted three cut head dogs down i.e killed and burnt naturally.
One ugliest so called deadly dog jumped so high never returned back while a single left dirty animal dog anyhow survived the bullet fading in the forest.
Tanu told Pankh along with full team members that our target seventh sin is near.
After that due to tiredness all of them sat on a relatively open space and burnt a fire spot as they were enjoying such type of peculiar trip so much as shown on the cover picture.
Kantilal after mini party checked his shotgun which found to be not in properly working order condition so he just threw it towards nowhere.
While next march towards their intended purpose of complete destruction of ghostly supernatural environment in seventh sin, they started to walk mildly towards old mansion house.
On the path Fiza discovered few continuous patches of blood stains from which huge smoke started to evaporate making them tougher to breathe.
They at once distributed in any direction due to which Pankh along with Gila and Fiza holding each others hand ran into the seventh building main gate at lesser night time around seven O'clock.
While Kantilal and Tiha reached backyard of the building having small opening into the mansion.
Tanu was shouting Hasi but actually no body could dare to laugh in those circumstances as both of them cheerfully hugged eachother after some struggle at a graveyard near the seventh sin building corridor.
Pankh pushed the main gate front side that sounded like chain pulling in a train which forcefully stopped it within no time.
While walking inside through broken footpath in the lawn Gila couldn't believed on her eyes and said to Fiza "I hope every other member in the group to be alive and safe".
Gila tried to knock the entrance door but incidentally one big ghostly ugly hand breaking the steel caught the neck of Pankh with high pressure.
Pankh unsuccessfully shouted "Nobody's there to help me out".
Fiza quickly found a hammer and started hitting hard at ghost's arm with severe several fast attempts that actually broke down its hand while Pankh wasn't available on foot but high in the air.
Gila grasped Pankh left leg and pulled him down as the cut portion hand of ghost lost absolutely without any visibility.
Hasi couldn't understand where both of them including Tanu were present and sat on a black coloured grave holding right hand of the guy.
With impactful sounds and disgusting irregular lights while sparkling lightning in the clouded sky a big tall deadly ghost started to come out from that particular single visible grave near seventh sin building mansion hounted house of eleventh century A.D.
Both of them tried to look into the eyes of ghost but couldn't find more than terror of horrible death in upcoming future.
Kantilal and Tiha entered into the seventh sin building mansion from backyard opening into darkness of room having a lighter in Kantilal's right hand.
There through damaged door that fell down made Pankh, Gila and Fiza to enter into the mansion building seventh sin having old fashioned torches got lightup instantly at building main front hall.
Hasi and Tanu ran for life and entered into the kitchen of the building from a typical mansion side door within few dangerous minutes.
The mirror loomed over them as they traversed the hallways of the abandoned mansion. It was rumoured that no one came out alive from it...
All seven friends were back together with a thankful charm on everyone's face in the seventh sin building's middle biggest hall.
As they were talking about the haunted paranormal behaviours continuously without any clarity an old fashion clothed person having rich voice came in front of them with backface to front face turned around slowly.
They had nowhere to move but except watching him closely nothing was really left on their luck part.
That was the main ghost of seventh sin.
"Tell me the opportunity to talk"
Ghost asked them with a growling voice.
"We're just college friends came to trip this wonderful forest site ...... enjoy........" said by Pankh.
"I told earlier before tour this area is highly haunted but you people........."
Gila told with a cry.
"We could talk a bit... if required.... not worried" Tanu said with low voice.
"Either kill one among yourselves or I would kill everyone and eat one by one of you" Ghost murmured.
"Fiza couldn't die, her parents ..."
Kantilal suggested.
"It means what, you all would kill me" Pankh said with unnecessary anger.
"Quick or game over" ghost replied.
As ghost tried to come forward towards Tiha in order to kill her with open dirty teethed mouth, Kantilal used his lighter to burn and show some courage.
While doing so during mashup his lighter fell down and blasted with a vigorous fire in the mansion.
Tanu got a sword somewhere and cut down the head of the ghost from backside.
Ghost head on the floor flied upward and got fixed in opposite direction on the neck making Tanu felt fear and ghost hit him back into the wall with severe harm even giddy.
Ghost rotated his head through both hands and fitted it rightly and tight yet set it's mouth accurately.
Everyone in the house shouted as loud as they could but in absolutely vain.
Hasi tried to help Tanu but ghost came in front of them.
Kantilal threw a round rope and tied him up even pulled the ghost some back from its chest.
Pankh started to throw broken mirror parts which were even burning with fire.
Those mirror got struck inside ghost and it's body started showing some damage while great fire originated like a furnace.
Through hands ghost tried successfully to remove fire from it's body while rope got burnt out during such process.
Hasi fastly found a kerosene container in the kitchen and took a fire stick from the hall ran quickly towards the ghost grave in the graveyard.
As she was pouring kerosene into the grave concrete and ghostly structure,
ghost who nearly killed Kantilal said "AHh not like this".
While murmuring Gayatri Mantra, Hasi gave a touch of fire stick into the kerosene on ghostly grave.
Burnt with pain as grave was fired ghost died finally.
Everyone among seven came out of front main gate as quickly as possible leaving behind burnt seventh sin.
© NSP
The mirror loomed over them as they traversed the hallways of the abandoned mansion. It was rumoured that no one came out alive from it...
Seven college friends from University Of Technology at Kanpur including three boys named as Kantilal, Pankh and Tanu with their four classmate girls known as Gila, Hasi, Tiha & Fiza as a traveling group toured together towards a lesser popular trip spot in a forest area at Kandla called "Seventh Sin".
As they approached their theme destination with no one available out there on foot because far long away at rural roadside it was clearly indicated by auto rickshaw driver as 'No more travel - it's prohibited to tour inside', All seven friends found a bigger rock on which this message was written with blooded flash -
GO INTERIOR AT ALVIDA...........
Gila smiled lightly and murmured "Rainfall is thick in this tourist place".
It was a new year day on first January even cold waves were better than ocean's disturbances as mid winter season in India.
"Where is my palace" said Tiha in a loud voice.
As they reached nearby seventh sin building, five wild dogs without head started barking and jumping on them while dangerous ghostly sounds were asking the reason for such advancement and with pitched language lacking hearable sense "you're not going to remain alive - yours life ends here".
Kantilal who had a shotgun in his hand hunted three cut head dogs down i.e killed and burnt naturally.
One ugliest so called deadly dog jumped so high never returned back while a single left dirty animal dog anyhow survived the bullet fading in the forest.
Tanu told Pankh along with full team members that our target seventh sin is near.
After that due to tiredness all of them sat on a relatively open space and burnt a fire spot as they were enjoying such type of peculiar trip so much as shown on the cover picture.
Kantilal after mini party checked his shotgun which found to be not in properly working order condition so he just threw it towards nowhere.
While next march towards their intended purpose of complete destruction of ghostly supernatural environment in seventh sin, they started to walk mildly towards old mansion house.
On the path Fiza discovered few continuous patches of blood stains from which huge smoke started to evaporate making them tougher to breathe.
They at once distributed in any direction due to which Pankh along with Gila and Fiza holding each others hand ran into the seventh building main gate at lesser night time around seven O'clock.
While Kantilal and Tiha reached backyard of the building having small opening into the mansion.
Tanu was shouting Hasi but actually no body could dare to laugh in those circumstances as both of them cheerfully hugged eachother after some struggle at a graveyard near the seventh sin building corridor.
Pankh pushed the main gate front side that sounded like chain pulling in a train which forcefully stopped it within no time.
While walking inside through broken footpath in the lawn Gila couldn't believed on her eyes and said to Fiza "I hope every other member in the group to be alive and safe".
Gila tried to knock the entrance door but incidentally one big ghostly ugly hand breaking the steel caught the neck of Pankh with high pressure.
Pankh unsuccessfully shouted "Nobody's there to help me out".
Fiza quickly found a hammer and started hitting hard at ghost's arm with severe several fast attempts that actually broke down its hand while Pankh wasn't available on foot but high in the air.
Gila grasped Pankh left leg and pulled him down as the cut portion hand of ghost lost absolutely without any visibility.
Hasi couldn't understand where both of them including Tanu were present and sat on a black coloured grave holding right hand of the guy.
With impactful sounds and disgusting irregular lights while sparkling lightning in the clouded sky a big tall deadly ghost started to come out from that particular single visible grave near seventh sin building mansion hounted house of eleventh century A.D.
Both of them tried to look into the eyes of ghost but couldn't find more than terror of horrible death in upcoming future.
Kantilal and Tiha entered into the seventh sin building mansion from backyard opening into darkness of room having a lighter in Kantilal's right hand.
There through damaged door that fell down made Pankh, Gila and Fiza to enter into the mansion building seventh sin having old fashioned torches got lightup instantly at building main front hall.
Hasi and Tanu ran for life and entered into the kitchen of the building from a typical mansion side door within few dangerous minutes.
The mirror loomed over them as they traversed the hallways of the abandoned mansion. It was rumoured that no one came out alive from it...
All seven friends were back together with a thankful charm on everyone's face in the seventh sin building's middle biggest hall.
As they were talking about the haunted paranormal behaviours continuously without any clarity an old fashion clothed person having rich voice came in front of them with backface to front face turned around slowly.
They had nowhere to move but except watching him closely nothing was really left on their luck part.
That was the main ghost of seventh sin.
"Tell me the opportunity to talk"
Ghost asked them with a growling voice.
"We're just college friends came to trip this wonderful forest site ...... enjoy........" said by Pankh.
"I told earlier before tour this area is highly haunted but you people........."
Gila told with a cry.
"We could talk a bit... if required.... not worried" Tanu said with low voice.
"Either kill one among yourselves or I would kill everyone and eat one by one of you" Ghost murmured.
"Fiza couldn't die, her parents ..."
Kantilal suggested.
"It means what, you all would kill me" Pankh said with unnecessary anger.
"Quick or game over" ghost replied.
As ghost tried to come forward towards Tiha in order to kill her with open dirty teethed mouth, Kantilal used his lighter to burn and show some courage.
While doing so during mashup his lighter fell down and blasted with a vigorous fire in the mansion.
Tanu got a sword somewhere and cut down the head of the ghost from backside.
Ghost head on the floor flied upward and got fixed in opposite direction on the neck making Tanu felt fear and ghost hit him back into the wall with severe harm even giddy.
Ghost rotated his head through both hands and fitted it rightly and tight yet set it's mouth accurately.
Everyone in the house shouted as loud as they could but in absolutely vain.
Hasi tried to help Tanu but ghost came in front of them.
Kantilal threw a round rope and tied him up even pulled the ghost some back from its chest.
Pankh started to throw broken mirror parts which were even burning with fire.
Those mirror got struck inside ghost and it's body started showing some damage while great fire originated like a furnace.
Through hands ghost tried successfully to remove fire from it's body while rope got burnt out during such process.
Hasi fastly found a kerosene container in the kitchen and took a fire stick from the hall ran quickly towards the ghost grave in the graveyard.
As she was pouring kerosene into the grave concrete and ghostly structure,
ghost who nearly killed Kantilal said "AHh not like this".
While murmuring Gayatri Mantra, Hasi gave a touch of fire stick into the kerosene on ghostly grave.
Burnt with pain as grave was fired ghost died finally.
Everyone among seven came out of front main gate as quickly as possible leaving behind burnt seventh sin.
© NSP
