notice; it's better to read while imagining it...


CHAPTER 1

#2..

Denshin: I'm home,,' Mom! Mom! I'm here..
Ellie: ( denshin little sister ),,' ohh big brother your here.,,
denshin: yahh,, where's mom?
chen; ( denshin mother ) oh son did you sold all the bread?
denshin: yap,, piece of cake


denshin give all the money to his mother,"
cheng notice the head of denshin,, what happened to your head,, denshin,
ohh!! this, that bitch on that house throw another alarm clock on the window.

denshin remember that he have another work,,
mom I need to go, while rushing to go out on the door.
denshin mother said' make sure you're home in time, I'm going to prepare dinner, and miusel are coming to join dinner for tonight." denshin, yes I'll be right on time, bye..

In Alice house:
teddy bathler of alice", young master wake up your grandfather are waiting.

alice act like she didn't hear teddy, but teddy is persistent to make alice prepare himself.,, " teddy think, ahh you won't gonna prepare, let's say, how long you manage to stay on your bed. teddy get a megaphone,
"shouting" ahhhhhhhh, owwwwww
alice are irritating she throw a pillow to his bathler,"
yahh get lost,
his bathler never stop bothering alice.
alice: ahh this old man, okay.' out I'm gonna prepare my self first.
his bathler said yes young master I'm waiting out side, take your time

on the street;
lala, lal lalya," denshin are very happy going to his work," singing a song jumping on street, but that smile turn to sadness, while he crossing on the street.
boom!! denshing having car accident, that accident causing his death.

the picture of denshin on there House
are being tumble..
cheng have a strange feeling,

alice and his bathler are in there way, going to his grandfather but unexpected accident happen the car they riding, is no brake that cause to hit someone, and the car are suddenly explode.


to be continued
for chap1 #3