Lahore via Jhelum ( please critique me)
Chapter 1
In the Mountains
Now when I'm alone, sitting under the night sky which fashions no stars, completly darks. And when I look into it,feels as if it is not the sky, it's devils eyes I am looking into. dark and black ;Darker than coal, darker than a sinner's soul. It is my purposeless life and all these thoughts, which keep snapping me away from the obscure reality and its between these snapshots I question the taboo I question the unquestionable, I question the forbidden, I question my existence. I am left with questions about myself, about ourselves, about religion and if it really does matter ? do the great lord really want to separte people, to tournament them??? In the bleak...
In the Mountains
Now when I'm alone, sitting under the night sky which fashions no stars, completly darks. And when I look into it,feels as if it is not the sky, it's devils eyes I am looking into. dark and black ;Darker than coal, darker than a sinner's soul. It is my purposeless life and all these thoughts, which keep snapping me away from the obscure reality and its between these snapshots I question the taboo I question the unquestionable, I question the forbidden, I question my existence. I am left with questions about myself, about ourselves, about religion and if it really does matter ? do the great lord really want to separte people, to tournament them??? In the bleak...