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Benji (rewrite)
(Before I start,I just wanted to say that,this is a rewrite of my first ever story that was publicated here wich is called Benji. I read through that old piece again and I admit,my english was horrible. But I am back with my way better speaking than it was before. Sorry for dissapearing,I have some troubles with school and private stuff,and I cant focus on writing brand new things,so I think I will start re-building my profile. Well,some parts maybe will change in the story,hope you enjoy :D)

P.S: All of this is fiction,nothing here happend,and I am gonna write this in first person, it makes it much easier.





Hello! My name is Benjamin. But everyone calls me Benji.
I am 13 year old,and I live on a huge island with my family. I have a little sister and a big brother. My sister's name is Lucy. She is young,I am 5 year older than her. Now my brother,Lucas, he is 5 years older than me. He still lives with us but really wants to go to the City.
I forgot to mention,there is a HUGE city near to our home isnland. I really hope I can get there one day. I've never been there before. Lucas told me "Oh I was there once" just to annoy me. But he really was there.
Me and Lucy have never been. I really want to see what its like there. In the evenings,the lights of The City (as we call it) glows,like a giant machine that never stops. Sometimes its hard to sleep.
My parents, Jeremy and Lily, said that they will only take us there if its really important,or for a special occasion.
I got really excided about this because my birthday is close. I told them I want to go and see the magician show that a poster siad will be in The City.
I really love magic. Especially transformations. I would be really happy to see a magic trick even though its not real. Well,I hope my wish will come true.
-Benji


(Thanks for reading,next rewrite of the chapter comes... soon.)


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