Space to live chapter 5 rewrite
Now before we start today yes Space to live wouldve been cancelled but I rewrote the end to this book and altough it sounds like the way I end an SA with the cliche plot twist its better than not twisting it at all so please forgive me for quiting on this book and give me a chance to fix it by reading through this rewrite and enjoying it join the salvation and please OH PLEASE read the end
Enjoy
Ok...Ok...No.Not today.This time its a chapter of peace and love.THE LOVE OF BREAKING PEACE AND KILLING A LITTLE IDIOTIC HUMAAAAAAAAA...
Hey there salvation writing here just wanna say thanks for tuning in on todays chapter.I was in the mood to write a little love story so today will go a little more into the subject of love.I have a suprise for the reader at the end of todays chapter so make sure to read it threw and remember.Lets get into it for today.
Nick is dreaming.A bunch of puppies around him.He is licked by them and he lies in a field of roses.Until he hears screaming come from behind him ONLY TO SEE MELIODAS OUR GREAT HERO JUMP IN TO FIGHT THE DRAG...
"WAKE UP NICK!"
"Wh...what?"
"THE SHIP GOT SUCKED UP BY A WORM HOLE WERE GETTING SUCKED IN."
Shu screams Nick awake.He screams and passes back out as Shu tries to get away.As they get sucked in he looks out to see jupiter the nearest planet at the time destroyed along with distant explosians.Shu doesnt believe what he see's as Neytiri looks at Shu scared and says
"I love yo..."
Shu and Neytiri both pass out sucked into the worm hole as it closes.All the explosian of planets as the universe they thought they knew gets destroyed.Shu dreams seeing his mother making food.Him sitting in his old living room drawing as a child.He looks up at his mother and says
"M...Mom?"
"Your in a new universe,a new start and an entire new life really."
"Mom...I cant make this threw."
"Honey...The Evils...They wont stop...You need to make it threw...You need to fight and make sure theur stopped."
"I...I dont understand mo..mom dont go"
His mom and the room starts fading away
"Evil and Good are seen diffrent...Make sure you know which one is right."
The room completely gone Shu wakes up in the crashed ship to look outside and see fields over and over.A giant city in the distance.He wakes up Neytiri as she jokes
"Were you watching me sleep pervert."
"Neytiri as much as your jokes are just LOVEABLE we have a bigger problem right now."
Neytiri looks shy as Shu wakes up Nick.He doesnt wake up.
Neytiri looks outside and at the destroyed ship.
"What,you remembering your LOVE for this ship."
"Just shut up about that.This isnt the time for jokes."
Neytiri soumds mad as she opens the door and the planet has oxigyn.The two walk outside as their ship crashed in a field.They look up to see a ship flying toward the city.Bothe curious they start walking
"What the hell happend.Where are we."
Neytiri asks as Shu looks concerned remembering the universe more or less being destroyed and his mothers word of being in a new universe
"I...I dont think were in the right universe anymore."
"What?"
"We went threw the wormhole.The earth was already gone and that ship looked pretty cool.Plus if you look up the reason this planet is so hot is because there are two sons."
"WHA...WHAT THE HELL...THE UNIVERSE...wow...not like the earth was there anyway...guess its just normal."
"Thats why I haevnt freaked out yet.Were safe for now but we still need food water and we need to think about what were gonna do."
"So just gonna go up to an alien race and calmly say:"Hey there were from another universe and we need to know whats going on." imagine its that easy"
Shu and Neytiri walk for a bit until they get to a front gate with a huge wall right before the city.Before Shu can talk a guard at the door says
"Hello there humans...Let me guess your from another universe and you need help."
"Ye...Yeah how did you know."
"Wormholes form all around weve encountered humans before...Your universe was unstable so allot on dimensional trouble.On top of that humans have come here before.Welcome to sector 4556 planet landmore...I mean planet lendbue."
"Lendbue...got it...can we get in and fimd food or..."
"Passports."
"Im sorry wha..."
"You need passports.I'll sjow you the way.You get passports you can move freely arpund...
Enjoy
Ok...Ok...No.Not today.This time its a chapter of peace and love.THE LOVE OF BREAKING PEACE AND KILLING A LITTLE IDIOTIC HUMAAAAAAAAA...
Hey there salvation writing here just wanna say thanks for tuning in on todays chapter.I was in the mood to write a little love story so today will go a little more into the subject of love.I have a suprise for the reader at the end of todays chapter so make sure to read it threw and remember.Lets get into it for today.
Nick is dreaming.A bunch of puppies around him.He is licked by them and he lies in a field of roses.Until he hears screaming come from behind him ONLY TO SEE MELIODAS OUR GREAT HERO JUMP IN TO FIGHT THE DRAG...
"WAKE UP NICK!"
"Wh...what?"
"THE SHIP GOT SUCKED UP BY A WORM HOLE WERE GETTING SUCKED IN."
Shu screams Nick awake.He screams and passes back out as Shu tries to get away.As they get sucked in he looks out to see jupiter the nearest planet at the time destroyed along with distant explosians.Shu doesnt believe what he see's as Neytiri looks at Shu scared and says
"I love yo..."
Shu and Neytiri both pass out sucked into the worm hole as it closes.All the explosian of planets as the universe they thought they knew gets destroyed.Shu dreams seeing his mother making food.Him sitting in his old living room drawing as a child.He looks up at his mother and says
"M...Mom?"
"Your in a new universe,a new start and an entire new life really."
"Mom...I cant make this threw."
"Honey...The Evils...They wont stop...You need to make it threw...You need to fight and make sure theur stopped."
"I...I dont understand mo..mom dont go"
His mom and the room starts fading away
"Evil and Good are seen diffrent...Make sure you know which one is right."
The room completely gone Shu wakes up in the crashed ship to look outside and see fields over and over.A giant city in the distance.He wakes up Neytiri as she jokes
"Were you watching me sleep pervert."
"Neytiri as much as your jokes are just LOVEABLE we have a bigger problem right now."
Neytiri looks shy as Shu wakes up Nick.He doesnt wake up.
Neytiri looks outside and at the destroyed ship.
"What,you remembering your LOVE for this ship."
"Just shut up about that.This isnt the time for jokes."
Neytiri soumds mad as she opens the door and the planet has oxigyn.The two walk outside as their ship crashed in a field.They look up to see a ship flying toward the city.Bothe curious they start walking
"What the hell happend.Where are we."
Neytiri asks as Shu looks concerned remembering the universe more or less being destroyed and his mothers word of being in a new universe
"I...I dont think were in the right universe anymore."
"What?"
"We went threw the wormhole.The earth was already gone and that ship looked pretty cool.Plus if you look up the reason this planet is so hot is because there are two sons."
"WHA...WHAT THE HELL...THE UNIVERSE...wow...not like the earth was there anyway...guess its just normal."
"Thats why I haevnt freaked out yet.Were safe for now but we still need food water and we need to think about what were gonna do."
"So just gonna go up to an alien race and calmly say:"Hey there were from another universe and we need to know whats going on." imagine its that easy"
Shu and Neytiri walk for a bit until they get to a front gate with a huge wall right before the city.Before Shu can talk a guard at the door says
"Hello there humans...Let me guess your from another universe and you need help."
"Ye...Yeah how did you know."
"Wormholes form all around weve encountered humans before...Your universe was unstable so allot on dimensional trouble.On top of that humans have come here before.Welcome to sector 4556 planet landmore...I mean planet lendbue."
"Lendbue...got it...can we get in and fimd food or..."
"Passports."
"Im sorry wha..."
"You need passports.I'll sjow you the way.You get passports you can move freely arpund...