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my dream adventure app
#WritcoStoryPrompt36
Write a short story that uses atleast two of the given situations:
1. An old, locked box in the attic.
2. A winding staircase that goes nowhere.
3. A broken mirror.
4. An old desk with a locked drawer.
My name is Kevin miller and I'm about to tell you about my story
it was the last day of school before summer I remember blocking out my English teacher words out as I stared at the clock tapping my fingers on the desk waiting for it to stroke one so I could leave with my friends for our adventure.
my friend Williams found this app called the satapaih for adventure so we made a decision to check it out literally I understand why they say curiosity kills the cat cause believe me it did .
so after the bell rang we all went to the parking lot and my parents being out of town put the cherry on the cake and won't be back till Sunday well that a story for another day ,we where seven who went on that trip Tyler ,kyle Catherine, Anika,Bray, Bryan Theo and I so we were eight we hopped into kyle truck and following the map to the sonnicy
and we drove for hours to get there for our supposed adventure after seeing some people comment on how amazing they were giving the app a five star rating now tell me who won't want to partake in that and finally we reached our destination at 5:47pm and we looked around taking our equipment along with us at least everything seemed normal at least that's what I thought .
we were just a stupid bunch of teenagers looking for fun but guess we drove excitedly to our death ,then we found a cool spot underneath a tree which we camped under for a better protection .
we got comfortable quickly gusting,chuckling and laughing okay except Catherine who was uncomfortable she said she felt like she was being watched as she scanned her surrounding for any potential threat but she found none ,bray got the urge to pee after the large consumption of drink he's had it didn't suprise me so he left into the woods for he's business while we continued our group chat then Tyler heated something as he shused us trying to get a better hearing of the sound but Bryan convinced us it was just bray trying to scare us as it seemed logical as I yelled the words “hey dick head why don't you quit playing stupid and get back here ” and everyone laughed at my words but when we heard no response kyle and Bryan tensed up cause he's taking so much time so we decided to check on him spitting up in focus to cover more ground after checking for over an hour and nothing Bryan began feeling tensed muttering things as he knew his twin brother was already in trouble we've tried calling but its not going through just then I heard Catherine scream and we knew something was wrong we went back to where we knew the other group after a while we found them trying to get the monster of bray who seemed to be dying and Bryan hitting the monster on the head to make him get off but it won't budge and Theo dragged Bryan so we could make a run just then we found three others coming to us and we all ran but it got blocked again by two others saying our last prayers we took a different path running away but they pursued us and so the chase began
I've always watched such movies and watching the protagonist make a run through such forest but right now I didn't know how to go about it...
Write a short story that uses atleast two of the given situations:
1. An old, locked box in the attic.
2. A winding staircase that goes nowhere.
3. A broken mirror.
4. An old desk with a locked drawer.
My name is Kevin miller and I'm about to tell you about my story
it was the last day of school before summer I remember blocking out my English teacher words out as I stared at the clock tapping my fingers on the desk waiting for it to stroke one so I could leave with my friends for our adventure.
my friend Williams found this app called the satapaih for adventure so we made a decision to check it out literally I understand why they say curiosity kills the cat cause believe me it did .
so after the bell rang we all went to the parking lot and my parents being out of town put the cherry on the cake and won't be back till Sunday well that a story for another day ,we where seven who went on that trip Tyler ,kyle Catherine, Anika,Bray, Bryan Theo and I so we were eight we hopped into kyle truck and following the map to the sonnicy
and we drove for hours to get there for our supposed adventure after seeing some people comment on how amazing they were giving the app a five star rating now tell me who won't want to partake in that and finally we reached our destination at 5:47pm and we looked around taking our equipment along with us at least everything seemed normal at least that's what I thought .
we were just a stupid bunch of teenagers looking for fun but guess we drove excitedly to our death ,then we found a cool spot underneath a tree which we camped under for a better protection .
we got comfortable quickly gusting,chuckling and laughing okay except Catherine who was uncomfortable she said she felt like she was being watched as she scanned her surrounding for any potential threat but she found none ,bray got the urge to pee after the large consumption of drink he's had it didn't suprise me so he left into the woods for he's business while we continued our group chat then Tyler heated something as he shused us trying to get a better hearing of the sound but Bryan convinced us it was just bray trying to scare us as it seemed logical as I yelled the words “hey dick head why don't you quit playing stupid and get back here ” and everyone laughed at my words but when we heard no response kyle and Bryan tensed up cause he's taking so much time so we decided to check on him spitting up in focus to cover more ground after checking for over an hour and nothing Bryan began feeling tensed muttering things as he knew his twin brother was already in trouble we've tried calling but its not going through just then I heard Catherine scream and we knew something was wrong we went back to where we knew the other group after a while we found them trying to get the monster of bray who seemed to be dying and Bryan hitting the monster on the head to make him get off but it won't budge and Theo dragged Bryan so we could make a run just then we found three others coming to us and we all ran but it got blocked again by two others saying our last prayers we took a different path running away but they pursued us and so the chase began
I've always watched such movies and watching the protagonist make a run through such forest but right now I didn't know how to go about it...
