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SCENE 7(AT COLLEGE)
Aman- hey kavya, aaj saturday h toh kahi bahar chle
Kavya-yr mera mann nhi h kahi b jane ka
aman- please yr ek break mil jaega college se tmhe b acha lgega
kavya- okay main riya ankita s b puch leti hu
aman- maine puch liya h or voh ready h
kavya- okay then kaha jana h
riya- movie chle?
ankita- nhi, gate way of india
kavya- beach kaisa rahega
riya/aman/ankita- perfect
kavya- okay college k baad chlte h
iss week mein aman k mann mein kavya k liye feelings develop ho jati h or vahi ankita aman ko psnd krne lgti h
AT BEACH
riya- chal na pani mein khelte h
kavya- nhi tm log jao main yaha s dekhungi
ankita- chal na yr bht maja aaega
kavya- tm log jao mujhe yaha bht acha lg rha h kitni shanti h yaha
riya- thik h
aman ankita riya pani mein chle jate kavya unko masti krte dekh bht khush hoti h
thodi der baad
aman- tm log kuch khaoge?
ankita- hnn itni masti krne k baad bht bhook lg rhi h
aman- ruko main le k aata hu kch
riya- chlo main b saath chalti hu
aman riya vaha s chle jate h tabhi kavya ankita s puchti h
kavya- tm aman ko psnd krti ho na
ankita(shocked bt cover krte huye)- nahi yr esa kch nhi h
kavya- tmhari shakal s saaf pta chlta h ki tm usse bht psnd krti ho
ankita- hnn mujhe aman bht psnd h lekin voh mujhe psnd krta h ya nhi mujhe nhi pta
kavya (smile krti h)- toh ja kr bta de usse
ankita- nhi yr pta nhi kya sochega voh
kavya- toh main bta du
ankita- pls tm usse kch mat bolna sahi time aane pr main khud bta dungi
kavya- thik h
tabhi aman riya aa jate h chaaro khoob masti kr k ghar chle jate h

at night
kavya balcony mein baithi hoti h tabhi vaha arjun aata h
arjun- mujhe yaad kr rhi thi
kavya- jii nhiii
arjun- toh fir uncle aunty ko
kavya arjun ki trf dhekti h or arjun ko serious dekh...