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THE JOURNEY FROM LOVE-HATRAYAD TO REGRETTS
Here’s the corrected version of Part 1 with improvements in grammar, punctuation, and readability:
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Part 1
Shinya was a 17-year-old innocent girl in her 12th grade. She was the class topper and always dreamed big. Despite her academic success, she had no arrogance. On the other hand, there was a boy named Jimmy. He was also in the same class, but he was often the object of ridicule at school because he was 19 years old and had repeated the 12th grade after failing it. However, no one dared to speak nonsense about him in his presence, as he was like the “don” of the class.
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Part 1
Shinya was a 17-year-old innocent girl in her 12th grade. She was the class topper and always dreamed big. Despite her academic success, she had no arrogance. On the other hand, there was a boy named Jimmy. He was also in the same class, but he was often the object of ridicule at school because he was 19 years old and had repeated the 12th grade after failing it. However, no one dared to speak nonsense about him in his presence, as he was like the “don” of the class.
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