update: trying at it again

A lone armored knight walks down the hall in silence with many eyes setting upon him from the crowd as he crouches down meeting the cold stone floor with his steel sword dangling from his side. The crowd filled with nobles and peasants whisper within hushing at once when a golden red king walks down the steps to meet the steel knight “you've been banished...yet I set my eyes upon you once more….Seigfried”. The king with a stern look eyes him down slowly then surveys the crowd “banishment doesn't seem to keep you away so what will ''? he says glancing towards them waiting for a response. Stares of death and hatred surround them and slowly they open their mouths “his head on a pike” one yells and then another and then another. Slowly they begin chanting “i ask you Siegfried of the Morgan Valley......why are you here?. Siegfried still crouched, “i've come to reclaim my honor...King Raimor” with a serious tone. King Raimor looks down on him “you abandoned my son, so what honor can you gain by spitting in my face now after losing my crippling land after the battle in Kavna”?. His grip on the hilt hardened by the second after looking down at Siegfrieds plea only infuriates the king after holding out his sadness after a son…. his only son parted him in due death in the fields of swords ragged and forgotten under the bodys. Siegfried's face only shows regret and guilt of the past "my death will bring nothing to you....but I offer something else''. “I care not for you or for your present heathen he spits out angrily, Siegfried looks up seeing the black guards taking small steps towards him behind the crowd “then forget honor, i did my best and i know it true” he says after brandishing his sword out and holding it in a defensive position. “Oh do you now” king raimor says with a grin stepping back “gaurds” he yells at them to move forward on siegfried while the crowd of nobles step away letting the black gaurds pass slowly.