Within The Loop➰
He is writing a poem,
but then he deletes it,
almost as if he knows we're watching him.
To prevent him from escaping the loop,
we must sedate him more, deepen his slumber
and keep him dreaming.
The signs of him nearing an escape are his frequent déjà vus,
saying words like "I've walked these paths before, I've known this soul before,
I've felt this familiarity," and the weird thoughts he expresses in his poems.
When these déjà vus and peculiar poems
become too frequent,
give him a long shot sedation.
Put him in a new story,
let him be the main character,
and start a new loop.
© Sage
but then he deletes it,
almost as if he knows we're watching him.
To prevent him from escaping the loop,
we must sedate him more, deepen his slumber
and keep him dreaming.
The signs of him nearing an escape are his frequent déjà vus,
saying words like "I've walked these paths before, I've known this soul before,
I've felt this familiarity," and the weird thoughts he expresses in his poems.
When these déjà vus and peculiar poems
become too frequent,
give him a long shot sedation.
Put him in a new story,
let him be the main character,
and start a new loop.
© Sage