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The Love shack revisited!
#WritcoStoryPrompt97
How you communicate with other people is all that matters. Emotions are important in our social life because they allow us to express and understand our feelings. Create a tale with it
I'm not coming back home again, said Evelyn, until you begin to treat me with decency..I mean it Percy! With suitcases in both hands she slams the front door..
My God, Percy said, she's really leaving me in this big house alone.. before I doubted she would but she really means it . Before long , Evelyn was driving away in her Car
Man, said Percy, this is a trip..I never knew she would take my apathy & complacency towards her to heart..She kept warning to dig myself & stop misbehaving..I admit her words fell on death ears..I thought if I loved her down & bring home gifts and trinkets..she would keep letting me slide.. She's leaving me ..Darn, she's leaving me..Let me call her cell..He calls, Babe, he questions, what are you doing?..She , after answering the phone pauses for a moment answering, I gave you too many chances to get it together... You can't keep treating me like my feelings don't matter! Percy Pierce.. you can not keep telling me you love me, then stay away for several nights on in..come back home & continue as if this doesn't matter..We are in a full time relationship.. I'm not your part-time lover fool.. you won't continue to pierce my heart with those poisonous dagger's of disrespect any longer.. Call me when you are to ready stop behaving infantile.. Click... Baby! Percy projected! ..She hung up! My baby done left me! I can't believe it.. Evelyn Jordan has left the building..He laughs to himself..Aw she'll be back...I put my mojo on her .. it's like magic..she can't resist me.. I'm the best thing that happened to Evelyn.
She will see ..she will come back begging for me..He looks at himself in the mirror & smiles..he pulls out his wallet and proceeds to count his money..all hundred dollar bill.. Shoot..she coming back..he puts his money back in his wallet and gets in bed ..he turns off his lamp next to the bed they once shared & GOES to sleep with ease..
Three days have passed, Evelyn neither calls or returns... Suddenly, Percy s hopes begins to dwindle..All his male friends tell him to let her go..They say the typical verbatim of men who believe they are the center of the universe.. But the only person willing to give him the proper advice he truly needs is the Stripper named A- trip..one night while at the strip club with her she gives him a rude awakening: Percy.. You need to have more respect for yourself and your lady . You are a good carpenter but you should get the worst boyfriend of the year award..Why do you even bother to come here & give me your money when all the woman you need is right at your home.. You Men are sometimes so clueless... You think because you give her money & give her your body that that's all Evelyn needs.. You could not be more wrong.. Don't get me wrong I love the money you give me..I pays my bills with it.... But you come here most of time wasting money, living a double life, when you should be home with the woman that loves you..I don't love you..I love that you give me money & we cool in a business sort of way but you are wasting money on me & my lap dancing when you should be dancing in the sheets at home with your wifey.. Percy looks at ATrip..He guzzles his beer..He gives her a glance, looks down in shame, & then retorted, You're right!! I should have stayed home with Evelyn and now she's been gone three days and nights..I miss her & I want my baby back home..Go get her ! ATrip commanded him .She pulls out a fifty dollar bill & gives it to him ."take back fifty of the money you gave to me & buy her some flowers or something man! " Why not give it all back..he said giggling..Get out of here before I stop behaving nicely..Go now dummy!.. Leaving the bar Percy not only buys her flowers but he gets her a music making greeting card... With Swift diligence he races to the only place he knows where Evelyn will be..He races to her identical twin sister Carolyns home..It takes him a half hour but he makes it there without a problem..He looks in the mirror..He sees that he for once has do like Evelyn said... Change his immature ways.. LIKE the speed of sound he is quickly out of his car & at her sister's front door.. Carolyn answers. Sis.. It's the Dunce..I guess he's here to beg you to come back.. Come get the door... Evelyn,arms folded arrives at the door..She silently glares at him without a word taking his flowers & just then, he opens the musical card which plays,the R&B classic: OH GIRL! by the CHI-LITES!....Baby we can work this thing out.. I'm willing to change because I don't want to lose you..We have been together too long & I don't want to lose you over some nonsense.. I'm sorry babe. Let's talk about this matter.. Evelyn rolls her eyes..Pouts & then relents saying " Come in little boy!! Maybe you will talk like the man I first fell in love with.. Percy smiles...this is a good start..he puts his arms over her shoulders and he excorts her back inside.
The End.
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How you communicate with other people is all that matters. Emotions are important in our social life because they allow us to express and understand our feelings. Create a tale with it
I'm not coming back home again, said Evelyn, until you begin to treat me with decency..I mean it Percy! With suitcases in both hands she slams the front door..
My God, Percy said, she's really leaving me in this big house alone.. before I doubted she would but she really means it . Before long , Evelyn was driving away in her Car
Man, said Percy, this is a trip..I never knew she would take my apathy & complacency towards her to heart..She kept warning to dig myself & stop misbehaving..I admit her words fell on death ears..I thought if I loved her down & bring home gifts and trinkets..she would keep letting me slide.. She's leaving me ..Darn, she's leaving me..Let me call her cell..He calls, Babe, he questions, what are you doing?..She , after answering the phone pauses for a moment answering, I gave you too many chances to get it together... You can't keep treating me like my feelings don't matter! Percy Pierce.. you can not keep telling me you love me, then stay away for several nights on in..come back home & continue as if this doesn't matter..We are in a full time relationship.. I'm not your part-time lover fool.. you won't continue to pierce my heart with those poisonous dagger's of disrespect any longer.. Call me when you are to ready stop behaving infantile.. Click... Baby! Percy projected! ..She hung up! My baby done left me! I can't believe it.. Evelyn Jordan has left the building..He laughs to himself..Aw she'll be back...I put my mojo on her .. it's like magic..she can't resist me.. I'm the best thing that happened to Evelyn.
She will see ..she will come back begging for me..He looks at himself in the mirror & smiles..he pulls out his wallet and proceeds to count his money..all hundred dollar bill.. Shoot..she coming back..he puts his money back in his wallet and gets in bed ..he turns off his lamp next to the bed they once shared & GOES to sleep with ease..
Three days have passed, Evelyn neither calls or returns... Suddenly, Percy s hopes begins to dwindle..All his male friends tell him to let her go..They say the typical verbatim of men who believe they are the center of the universe.. But the only person willing to give him the proper advice he truly needs is the Stripper named A- trip..one night while at the strip club with her she gives him a rude awakening: Percy.. You need to have more respect for yourself and your lady . You are a good carpenter but you should get the worst boyfriend of the year award..Why do you even bother to come here & give me your money when all the woman you need is right at your home.. You Men are sometimes so clueless... You think because you give her money & give her your body that that's all Evelyn needs.. You could not be more wrong.. Don't get me wrong I love the money you give me..I pays my bills with it.... But you come here most of time wasting money, living a double life, when you should be home with the woman that loves you..I don't love you..I love that you give me money & we cool in a business sort of way but you are wasting money on me & my lap dancing when you should be dancing in the sheets at home with your wifey.. Percy looks at ATrip..He guzzles his beer..He gives her a glance, looks down in shame, & then retorted, You're right!! I should have stayed home with Evelyn and now she's been gone three days and nights..I miss her & I want my baby back home..Go get her ! ATrip commanded him .She pulls out a fifty dollar bill & gives it to him ."take back fifty of the money you gave to me & buy her some flowers or something man! " Why not give it all back..he said giggling..Get out of here before I stop behaving nicely..Go now dummy!.. Leaving the bar Percy not only buys her flowers but he gets her a music making greeting card... With Swift diligence he races to the only place he knows where Evelyn will be..He races to her identical twin sister Carolyns home..It takes him a half hour but he makes it there without a problem..He looks in the mirror..He sees that he for once has do like Evelyn said... Change his immature ways.. LIKE the speed of sound he is quickly out of his car & at her sister's front door.. Carolyn answers. Sis.. It's the Dunce..I guess he's here to beg you to come back.. Come get the door... Evelyn,arms folded arrives at the door..She silently glares at him without a word taking his flowers & just then, he opens the musical card which plays,the R&B classic: OH GIRL! by the CHI-LITES!....Baby we can work this thing out.. I'm willing to change because I don't want to lose you..We have been together too long & I don't want to lose you over some nonsense.. I'm sorry babe. Let's talk about this matter.. Evelyn rolls her eyes..Pouts & then relents saying " Come in little boy!! Maybe you will talk like the man I first fell in love with.. Percy smiles...this is a good start..he puts his arms over her shoulders and he excorts her back inside.
The End.
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