Hey guys, so it is a suggestion post. So, today I was talking to my cousin sister and she said that she wanted to read one of my stories and wanted to create one from herself. So, I gave her my phone with the 'Rival King's Secret Wife' on this app, she has read it and said that the base storyline is weak and the storyline is neglecting the boy means Hunter. She said that it has grammatical mistakes too, which I agreed. After some time I told her the spoilers of the story and told how Gulian saved Rowena and why, she just said that 'It...