Love at first sight
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Alaya, 26 years old girl, always spend her time with her books as for her books never complains. For Alaya love won't exist. She think love is a waste of time and it must be erased . She always ponder why a two fall in love when they both knew very well that they have to go through pain at some point. This is the debate point with her friends when she put her theory of love in front of them. They ask why she always say one has to go through pain, there are many who are happy in being with love. But she says there are many who love for time pass or...... to which her friends try to show her a real side of love but she won't.
Her best companion is her books. Though she won't believe in love yet her favorite novels are the subject on love. Most of the book she possesses are love based. And her friends...
Alaya, 26 years old girl, always spend her time with her books as for her books never complains. For Alaya love won't exist. She think love is a waste of time and it must be erased . She always ponder why a two fall in love when they both knew very well that they have to go through pain at some point. This is the debate point with her friends when she put her theory of love in front of them. They ask why she always say one has to go through pain, there are many who are happy in being with love. But she says there are many who love for time pass or...... to which her friends try to show her a real side of love but she won't.
Her best companion is her books. Though she won't believe in love yet her favorite novels are the subject on love. Most of the book she possesses are love based. And her friends...