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#WritcoStoryPrompt44
Write a story based on this famous excerpt from Lamb to the Slaughter by Roald Dahl:
rewritten by: Benjie Dolor M.
6 years ago, when mael enter high school.
( alarm rang ) crink, crink. I want to sleep a little more.( alarm rang again )
heystt.. how irritating he throw the alarm clock,'boom.
a second left looking to the alarm clock what time it's, it. 7:00am
huhhh. Jesus I'm late, it's my first day of school. changing cloths, darn it I'm already late. mael change in rush,' and there something he forgot.
( school campus,')
wow. this is awesome,. jumping, jumping. wow is this a dream. mael asking himself, why they are looking at me?. is there something in my face,'' yeah stop looking at me! I know I'm handsome." haystt...
" ahh darn it, I need to go to my classroom," he run fast.
( classroom )
teacher..
rose,' present ma'am." mael?, mael?
I'm here ma'am present, sorry I'm late.
teacher: ohh what happened to you?
mael: it's traffic
teacher; no! what happened to your pants."( mael ), what? what do you mean?. look to his pants, no! I forgot to wear may pants.. ( laughing )
nooooo!!( shouting )
mael, wake up on his dream. dream about on his past.
mael; huh how annoying.
mael getting ready to go the forest to get woods.
present; 2021 in the forest.
chapter 1.
( maiden. )
The violence of the crash, the noise, the small table overturning, helped bring her out of the shock. She came out slowly, feeling cold and surprised, and she stood for a while blinking at the body, still holding the ridiculous piece of meat tight with both hands.
All right, she told herself. So I’ve killed him...she stare his hand holding a meat of person, filled with blood. I killed l killed him. what did I do asking herself? she mourned and mourned crying full of guilt. no! no! not, guilt. it on despair
looking his cursed hand, started to smile and laugh, hahaha. Realized how beautiful killing someone. she act like crazy..
die, die, die. Walking like a maiden have no soul. Dragged a sword full stain," ezzz " she is coming to that couples lost on dark forest.
kissing and doing naughty things." who are you? the boy said. what are you staring at? huh!! do you want to join.. he dragged the maiden and kissing it. the boy have no idea that maiden is a killer.
ouch!! what do you think you are doing slicing the hand. the boy got angry he tried to attack the maiden. she swing his sword and get the head of that boy. " the girl shout and run, runout of breath.
huh! you want to play hide and seek. fine I give you what you want.
his hand put on his mouth having a fear on his face, I'm afraid I don't want to die. whispering on his own.
hearing a foot print, turn his head to left there's nothing"...
Write a story based on this famous excerpt from Lamb to the Slaughter by Roald Dahl:
rewritten by: Benjie Dolor M.
6 years ago, when mael enter high school.
( alarm rang ) crink, crink. I want to sleep a little more.( alarm rang again )
heystt.. how irritating he throw the alarm clock,'boom.
a second left looking to the alarm clock what time it's, it. 7:00am
huhhh. Jesus I'm late, it's my first day of school. changing cloths, darn it I'm already late. mael change in rush,' and there something he forgot.
( school campus,')
wow. this is awesome,. jumping, jumping. wow is this a dream. mael asking himself, why they are looking at me?. is there something in my face,'' yeah stop looking at me! I know I'm handsome." haystt...
" ahh darn it, I need to go to my classroom," he run fast.
( classroom )
teacher..
rose,' present ma'am." mael?, mael?
I'm here ma'am present, sorry I'm late.
teacher: ohh what happened to you?
mael: it's traffic
teacher; no! what happened to your pants."( mael ), what? what do you mean?. look to his pants, no! I forgot to wear may pants.. ( laughing )
nooooo!!( shouting )
mael, wake up on his dream. dream about on his past.
mael; huh how annoying.
mael getting ready to go the forest to get woods.
present; 2021 in the forest.
chapter 1.
( maiden. )
The violence of the crash, the noise, the small table overturning, helped bring her out of the shock. She came out slowly, feeling cold and surprised, and she stood for a while blinking at the body, still holding the ridiculous piece of meat tight with both hands.
All right, she told herself. So I’ve killed him...she stare his hand holding a meat of person, filled with blood. I killed l killed him. what did I do asking herself? she mourned and mourned crying full of guilt. no! no! not, guilt. it on despair
looking his cursed hand, started to smile and laugh, hahaha. Realized how beautiful killing someone. she act like crazy..
die, die, die. Walking like a maiden have no soul. Dragged a sword full stain," ezzz " she is coming to that couples lost on dark forest.
kissing and doing naughty things." who are you? the boy said. what are you staring at? huh!! do you want to join.. he dragged the maiden and kissing it. the boy have no idea that maiden is a killer.
ouch!! what do you think you are doing slicing the hand. the boy got angry he tried to attack the maiden. she swing his sword and get the head of that boy. " the girl shout and run, runout of breath.
huh! you want to play hide and seek. fine I give you what you want.
his hand put on his mouth having a fear on his face, I'm afraid I don't want to die. whispering on his own.
hearing a foot print, turn his head to left there's nothing"...
