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Write a story based on this famous excerpt from Lamb to the Slaughter by Roald Dahl:
rewritten by: Benjie Dolor M.
6 years ago, when mael enter high school.
( alarm rang ) crink, crink. I want to sleep a little more.( alarm rang again )
heystt.. how irritating he throw the alarm clock,'boom.
a second left looking to the alarm clock what time it's, it. 7:00am
huhhh. Jesus I'm late, it's my first day of school. changing cloths, darn it I'm already late. mael change in rush,' and there something he forgot.
( school campus,')
wow. this is awesome,. jumping, jumping. wow is this a dream. mael asking himself, why they are looking at me?. is there something in my face,'' yeah stop looking at me! I know I'm handsome." haystt...
" ahh darn it, I need to go to my classroom," he run fast.
( classroom )
teacher..
rose,' present ma'am." mael?, mael?
I'm here ma'am present, sorry I'm late.
teacher: ohh what happened to you?
mael: it's traffic
teacher; no! what happened to your pants."( mael ), what? what do you mean?. look to his pants, no! I forgot to wear may pants.. ( laughing )
nooooo!!( shouting )
mael, wake up on his dream. dream about on his past.
mael; huh how annoying.
mael getting ready to go the forest to get woods.
present; 2021 in the forest.
chapter 1.
( maiden. )
The violence of the crash, the noise, the small table overturning, helped bring her out of the shock. She came out slowly, feeling cold and surprised, and she stood for a while blinking at the body, still holding the ridiculous piece of meat tight with both hands.
All right, she told herself. So I’ve killed him...she stare his hand holding a meat of person, filled with blood. I killed l killed him. what did I do asking herself? she mourned and mourned crying full of guilt. no! no! not, guilt. it on despair
looking his cursed hand, started to smile and laugh, hahaha. Realized how beautiful killing someone. she act like crazy..
die, die, die. Walking like a maiden have no soul. Dragged a sword full stain," ezzz " she is coming to that couples lost on dark forest.
kissing and doing naughty things." who are you? the boy said. what are you staring at? huh!! do you want to join.. he dragged the maiden and kissing it. the boy have no idea that maiden is a killer.
ouch!! what do you think you are doing slicing the hand. the boy got angry he tried to attack the maiden. she swing his sword and get the head of that boy. " the girl shout and run, runout of breath.
huh! you want to play hide and seek. fine I give you what you want.
his hand put on his mouth having a fear on his face, I'm afraid I don't want to die. whispering on his own.
hearing a foot print, turn his head to left there's nothing" huh " she thought his being saved, but when she turn herslf on his back the maiden is there.
I got you. there's no more hiding" stabbed on head. Say may the god sanctify your soul in heaven, and cleanse your cursed soul." black "
after she killed the couples, she walk and walk on the forest, " passing out "
the boy named MAEL G are in hiking, sing a song. la, la, lal, lalya, la, la, lal, lalya. he saw a girl unconscious, running in. and he put the girl on his back," take to his house.
"hearing chopping something" the maiden is awake, she saw a knife behind to MAEL, she pick a knife to murdered MAEL.
slowly, slowly, and slowly walking to MAEL.
ohh your awake, are you okay?
I saw you unconscious in the forest so brought you here in my house.
come over here and seat, the food is ready you need to eat to regain your strength.
MAEL start talking, asking" if you don't mind can I ask your name?
staring" yah what's that gaze, stop I'm scared. the girl start talking asking, are you scared on me. MAEL "staring"
I'm latina and you?
smile,' I'm MAEL and I have no reason to be afraid on a beautiful and innocent girl like you. MAEL remembered that he have work. latina? I need to go, let's talk tomorrow. I'm gonna escort you to go to your place.
and still it's late it's too dangerous to a girl walking on the street alone.
mael pat latinas head and smile.
latina realize that, that was his first time being treated like that.
mael on his work place;
cleaning the table.
tv. ( breaking news,)
two body found on the forest being murdered. the both victim is the daughter and son of the most powerful and influencial person. both family have no intension filing a case against the culprit, but the culprit are still unknown.
mael manager: goshhh the world now is so scary." mael? I'm going out first there is an emergency on my house.
mael; yes manager no problem.
3hours later mael fall asleep.
mael manager; mael wake up. why are you still here.
mael; oh manager you're here.
mael manager; you can go now, leave the rest to me.
mael: oh thanks manager, I gonna go
mael on the street, he saw a cat.
mael, oh are you hungry kitty. mael buy a food for a cat, after that mael decided to bring the kitty to his house.
mael on his house..
I'm home, it's to dark we'res. mael open the light, and she saw latina asleep. mael put his jacket to latina.
wow. even she is asleep she is still cute, I can't help it.
mael: ahh!! sorry I disturb your sleep.
latina: you're here! no you didn't disturb me at all.
mael: just go to my room. it's much more comfortable.
latina: and you?
mael; I use this sofa.
latina; no thanks, but it's okay, just go to your room.
mael ; no go to my room, I want you to have a comfortable rest.
mael are persistence. he keep mocking latina to go to his bed. but latina keep telling him I'm okay here just rest on your room.
and mael won't stop.
latina: hayst.. okay I gonna use your room. but I have a condition.
mael: okay what it is?
latina: let's go to your room together and sleep together.
mael: huh?
a second mael think a hype.. imagination.
hey babe are you ready, it so hot. make it faster take my clothes it so hot babe. I want to shout.. ah ah ah ah ah it's hurts ah. ah. ah
latina: hey. hey are you okay. hey!
mael: Nuh.. stop, stop...
latina: what? you don't want to sleep together.
ahhh stop mael run to his room.
latina: whats wrong with him? latina smell her self and look at her face, I'm I ugly. why he won't to sleep together.
ans she remember the reaction mael.
and said," smile he's to cute.
( BJ & dL gruop )
BJ group dL group the most powerful and influencial person. BJ group is the son( reyco )/ that killed latina and dL group is one of the daughter( fie ) that killed latina.
bruno father of fie: bruno make a fuss on BJ because of the decision not make an action about, who's behind of killing his daughter fie.
bruno punched mickey, and all the body guard of mickey lay a gun on bruno.
mickey: make a sign.. that means put your gun down.
bruno; yeah mickey what do you think you're doing? don't tell me you have no intention finding the jerk, who killed my daughter and your son
mickey stare to bruno like he's gonna eat it.
mickey: who do think I'm bruno? I'm not that good. I'm going to kill that jerk with my two hands..
laugh...
8am.
early in the morning mael, awake. he fell there some thing heavy and he saw latina in front of him.
touching latina's chicks, and a moment he touched Latina boobs.
wow..
latina open his eyes.. and she got a red face.
mael: huh this isn't a dream. this is bad.
latina slapped mael face.
boom!!!!!
( on the street
way to his work )....
huh.. what I'm I thinking, why I did not realize that was not a dream.
phew.. that was annoying. stop thinking you better apologize later, huh..
mael was really annoyed himself, so he run fast, like thunder.
( work place )
I'm here manager,' morning
"out of breath"
manager: what happened to you mael, like you're being chased.
mael: yeah! I'm chased of a boobs.
manager: huh?
mael; hahaha Nuh,, never mind.
manager; phew.. teenage now a days are so weird..
mael go to luckier to change, to wear a uniform..
mael work and lot of customers went to his work place..
( mael phone rang )
he saw yana is calling, " yana is a long time friend of mael, and yana have a secret romantic feeling for mael, mael are stupid he didn't realize that yana have a feelings for him..
mael: oh.. how are you ( mael don't speak to yana casually, he treated it well like a younger sister..
yana, ( always speak to mael in a cute way.
ma mael are you free tonight, there's something I want to talk to you
, if you're not busy let's have a dinner tonight.
mael; sure! just text me the address. but now I have a work that I need to finish, bye see you later.
yana are excited for tonight dinner with mael. she prepared a lot to impress mael.
mael contacted latina, that he's gonna be late, cuz.. he have business with yana.
( on house of mael )
latina; come here kitty, she's having a conversation with a cat.
huh, your owner are gonna be late tonight and he's having a dinner with someone.
asking a cat.. hey kitty who's gonna eat the dinner I prepared. I cook a lot.
latina is little disappointed cuz.. mael are not going to eat dinner with her.
mael and yana are now having a dinner . talking, laughing, and seems like they're injoying the night..
that night yana are confessing his feeling for mael.
mael: ahh.. I almost forgot, you said there's something you want to talk to me.
so yana prepared herself, talking to her self. " okay let's do this.
yana; mael? I, I
when the time yana speak to mael that she have a feelings for him. the body guard of bruno the father of yana.
bodygourd ( gudo ): young master your father want to see you weather you like it or not, if you reject. we have a permission to use force. so you better choose.
mael asking yana what's going. who are this people, did you know them
yana: they are the dog of father.
let's talk tomorrow mael, I have unfinished business.
gudo touch yana.
yana got angry, don't touch me. I'm not going to run again.
gudo: my apologies young master.
yana: see you later mael. bye, bye..
mael on his way home, he keep thinking that his long time friend are super rich, and he have know idea.
mael: I'm home.
mael saw a food on the table that latina prepared. he eat the food, " wow this is delicious. mael breath so deep, and say this girl are hopeless, she always prepared food for me.
mael finish eating. go to his room and he saw latina asleep. he put blanket to latina. he touched Latina hair, eyes, nose, and lips. wow she is so pretty without doubt.
and mael say goodnight to latina.
mael: goodnight latina.
mael leave the room and close the door.
but that time latina are awake.
latina; good night mael.
to be continued..
( I'm not good at writing story even my English are not perfect. I just keep writing these even you hate it.. I write, because this is the only stuff I know. please help me to write a story and to be recognized others... all I want is to be loved of others..)
Write a story based on this famous excerpt from Lamb to the Slaughter by Roald Dahl:
rewritten by: Benjie Dolor M.
6 years ago, when mael enter high school.
( alarm rang ) crink, crink. I want to sleep a little more.( alarm rang again )
heystt.. how irritating he throw the alarm clock,'boom.
a second left looking to the alarm clock what time it's, it. 7:00am
huhhh. Jesus I'm late, it's my first day of school. changing cloths, darn it I'm already late. mael change in rush,' and there something he forgot.
( school campus,')
wow. this is awesome,. jumping, jumping. wow is this a dream. mael asking himself, why they are looking at me?. is there something in my face,'' yeah stop looking at me! I know I'm handsome." haystt...
" ahh darn it, I need to go to my classroom," he run fast.
( classroom )
teacher..
rose,' present ma'am." mael?, mael?
I'm here ma'am present, sorry I'm late.
teacher: ohh what happened to you?
mael: it's traffic
teacher; no! what happened to your pants."( mael ), what? what do you mean?. look to his pants, no! I forgot to wear may pants.. ( laughing )
nooooo!!( shouting )
mael, wake up on his dream. dream about on his past.
mael; huh how annoying.
mael getting ready to go the forest to get woods.
present; 2021 in the forest.
chapter 1.
( maiden. )
The violence of the crash, the noise, the small table overturning, helped bring her out of the shock. She came out slowly, feeling cold and surprised, and she stood for a while blinking at the body, still holding the ridiculous piece of meat tight with both hands.
All right, she told herself. So I’ve killed him...she stare his hand holding a meat of person, filled with blood. I killed l killed him. what did I do asking herself? she mourned and mourned crying full of guilt. no! no! not, guilt. it on despair
looking his cursed hand, started to smile and laugh, hahaha. Realized how beautiful killing someone. she act like crazy..
die, die, die. Walking like a maiden have no soul. Dragged a sword full stain," ezzz " she is coming to that couples lost on dark forest.
kissing and doing naughty things." who are you? the boy said. what are you staring at? huh!! do you want to join.. he dragged the maiden and kissing it. the boy have no idea that maiden is a killer.
ouch!! what do you think you are doing slicing the hand. the boy got angry he tried to attack the maiden. she swing his sword and get the head of that boy. " the girl shout and run, runout of breath.
huh! you want to play hide and seek. fine I give you what you want.
his hand put on his mouth having a fear on his face, I'm afraid I don't want to die. whispering on his own.
hearing a foot print, turn his head to left there's nothing" huh " she thought his being saved, but when she turn herslf on his back the maiden is there.
I got you. there's no more hiding" stabbed on head. Say may the god sanctify your soul in heaven, and cleanse your cursed soul." black "
after she killed the couples, she walk and walk on the forest, " passing out "
the boy named MAEL G are in hiking, sing a song. la, la, lal, lalya, la, la, lal, lalya. he saw a girl unconscious, running in. and he put the girl on his back," take to his house.
"hearing chopping something" the maiden is awake, she saw a knife behind to MAEL, she pick a knife to murdered MAEL.
slowly, slowly, and slowly walking to MAEL.
ohh your awake, are you okay?
I saw you unconscious in the forest so brought you here in my house.
come over here and seat, the food is ready you need to eat to regain your strength.
MAEL start talking, asking" if you don't mind can I ask your name?
staring" yah what's that gaze, stop I'm scared. the girl start talking asking, are you scared on me. MAEL "staring"
I'm latina and you?
smile,' I'm MAEL and I have no reason to be afraid on a beautiful and innocent girl like you. MAEL remembered that he have work. latina? I need to go, let's talk tomorrow. I'm gonna escort you to go to your place.
and still it's late it's too dangerous to a girl walking on the street alone.
mael pat latinas head and smile.
latina realize that, that was his first time being treated like that.
mael on his work place;
cleaning the table.
tv. ( breaking news,)
two body found on the forest being murdered. the both victim is the daughter and son of the most powerful and influencial person. both family have no intension filing a case against the culprit, but the culprit are still unknown.
mael manager: goshhh the world now is so scary." mael? I'm going out first there is an emergency on my house.
mael; yes manager no problem.
3hours later mael fall asleep.
mael manager; mael wake up. why are you still here.
mael; oh manager you're here.
mael manager; you can go now, leave the rest to me.
mael: oh thanks manager, I gonna go
mael on the street, he saw a cat.
mael, oh are you hungry kitty. mael buy a food for a cat, after that mael decided to bring the kitty to his house.
mael on his house..
I'm home, it's to dark we'res. mael open the light, and she saw latina asleep. mael put his jacket to latina.
wow. even she is asleep she is still cute, I can't help it.
mael: ahh!! sorry I disturb your sleep.
latina: you're here! no you didn't disturb me at all.
mael: just go to my room. it's much more comfortable.
latina: and you?
mael; I use this sofa.
latina; no thanks, but it's okay, just go to your room.
mael ; no go to my room, I want you to have a comfortable rest.
mael are persistence. he keep mocking latina to go to his bed. but latina keep telling him I'm okay here just rest on your room.
and mael won't stop.
latina: hayst.. okay I gonna use your room. but I have a condition.
mael: okay what it is?
latina: let's go to your room together and sleep together.
mael: huh?
a second mael think a hype.. imagination.
hey babe are you ready, it so hot. make it faster take my clothes it so hot babe. I want to shout.. ah ah ah ah ah it's hurts ah. ah. ah
latina: hey. hey are you okay. hey!
mael: Nuh.. stop, stop...
latina: what? you don't want to sleep together.
ahhh stop mael run to his room.
latina: whats wrong with him? latina smell her self and look at her face, I'm I ugly. why he won't to sleep together.
ans she remember the reaction mael.
and said," smile he's to cute.
( BJ & dL gruop )
BJ group dL group the most powerful and influencial person. BJ group is the son( reyco )/ that killed latina and dL group is one of the daughter( fie ) that killed latina.
bruno father of fie: bruno make a fuss on BJ because of the decision not make an action about, who's behind of killing his daughter fie.
bruno punched mickey, and all the body guard of mickey lay a gun on bruno.
mickey: make a sign.. that means put your gun down.
bruno; yeah mickey what do you think you're doing? don't tell me you have no intention finding the jerk, who killed my daughter and your son
mickey stare to bruno like he's gonna eat it.
mickey: who do think I'm bruno? I'm not that good. I'm going to kill that jerk with my two hands..
laugh...
8am.
early in the morning mael, awake. he fell there some thing heavy and he saw latina in front of him.
touching latina's chicks, and a moment he touched Latina boobs.
wow..
latina open his eyes.. and she got a red face.
mael: huh this isn't a dream. this is bad.
latina slapped mael face.
boom!!!!!
( on the street
way to his work )....
huh.. what I'm I thinking, why I did not realize that was not a dream.
phew.. that was annoying. stop thinking you better apologize later, huh..
mael was really annoyed himself, so he run fast, like thunder.
( work place )
I'm here manager,' morning
"out of breath"
manager: what happened to you mael, like you're being chased.
mael: yeah! I'm chased of a boobs.
manager: huh?
mael; hahaha Nuh,, never mind.
manager; phew.. teenage now a days are so weird..
mael go to luckier to change, to wear a uniform..
mael work and lot of customers went to his work place..
( mael phone rang )
he saw yana is calling, " yana is a long time friend of mael, and yana have a secret romantic feeling for mael, mael are stupid he didn't realize that yana have a feelings for him..
mael: oh.. how are you ( mael don't speak to yana casually, he treated it well like a younger sister..
yana, ( always speak to mael in a cute way.
ma mael are you free tonight, there's something I want to talk to you
, if you're not busy let's have a dinner tonight.
mael; sure! just text me the address. but now I have a work that I need to finish, bye see you later.
yana are excited for tonight dinner with mael. she prepared a lot to impress mael.
mael contacted latina, that he's gonna be late, cuz.. he have business with yana.
( on house of mael )
latina; come here kitty, she's having a conversation with a cat.
huh, your owner are gonna be late tonight and he's having a dinner with someone.
asking a cat.. hey kitty who's gonna eat the dinner I prepared. I cook a lot.
latina is little disappointed cuz.. mael are not going to eat dinner with her.
mael and yana are now having a dinner . talking, laughing, and seems like they're injoying the night..
that night yana are confessing his feeling for mael.
mael: ahh.. I almost forgot, you said there's something you want to talk to me.
so yana prepared herself, talking to her self. " okay let's do this.
yana; mael? I, I
when the time yana speak to mael that she have a feelings for him. the body guard of bruno the father of yana.
bodygourd ( gudo ): young master your father want to see you weather you like it or not, if you reject. we have a permission to use force. so you better choose.
mael asking yana what's going. who are this people, did you know them
yana: they are the dog of father.
let's talk tomorrow mael, I have unfinished business.
gudo touch yana.
yana got angry, don't touch me. I'm not going to run again.
gudo: my apologies young master.
yana: see you later mael. bye, bye..
mael on his way home, he keep thinking that his long time friend are super rich, and he have know idea.
mael: I'm home.
mael saw a food on the table that latina prepared. he eat the food, " wow this is delicious. mael breath so deep, and say this girl are hopeless, she always prepared food for me.
mael finish eating. go to his room and he saw latina asleep. he put blanket to latina. he touched Latina hair, eyes, nose, and lips. wow she is so pretty without doubt.
and mael say goodnight to latina.
mael: goodnight latina.
mael leave the room and close the door.
but that time latina are awake.
latina; good night mael.
to be continued..
( I'm not good at writing story even my English are not perfect. I just keep writing these even you hate it.. I write, because this is the only stuff I know. please help me to write a story and to be recognized others... all I want is to be loved of others..)
