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Below was the first story I published 10months ago. Pardon my grammar for I did not made any changes ever since, I hope you will like it.
The first writer who commented was @NabhahSprsamDiptamaforgetenhuman she's not active at present because of her studies, she's a fabulous person and writer... I missed her and all the writers who came accross with me, my writings and their wonderful creations. You may also read it at #laistory and see how the other writers react on it. It was a writco story challenge during that time so I thought of writing a unique story, as I hoped it to be.
I never imagined that I would continue writing stuffs like this. I was a bit hesitant at first, but writing became my hobby and my Outlet. An Outlet where I could express my thoughts and feelings. I hope in my own little way, you get lessons and inspirations from the topics I published on a daily basis. As one writco writer quoted once "I'm not here to impress but to express".
KICKED OUT
Have you ever heard of a father who is being kicked out of his own children's home?
Their father worked overseas so that they could have a better life and send his six children to good schools.
His children studied hard and became successful in their own fields of interests.
The eldest son graduated, hired and also went overseas, same country his father went into
and did a good job there. Since, rent was high, so as the standard of living, they had decided to live in one roof and agreed on some terms and agreements.
And soon after... His son got married, bought his own house and everything went well for years.
Now, the wife is still in their own country and took care of the other younger siblings. They applied for scholarships because the money that the father was sending is not enough to cover all of their expenses. Luckily, they all received a scholarship grant to continue further their studies. One by one, the siblings graduated with flying colors.
Eventually, all of them, including the wife went overseas
and Lived together at the older son's house,
since they had no baby yet,
they have decided to stay at his house.
The other siblings was hired by some big companies,
earn as much as they needed,
became wealthy, can afford stuff,
can travel and so forth.
Lived Successfully,
Lived on their own separately.
The eldest son thought that they would be happy because their lives were better than before.
They suspected that their father had another woman,
of course all of the sympathy goes to their mother,
they are worried because she was sad.
The mother said she saw their father communicating with someone
in a social media site,
another woman,
a younger one,
saw pictures together
and messages that boyfried-girlfriend are usually saying.
The father denied everything. Now, they asked their father how much money/savings he has.
After years of working he has no savings at all.
They question him how come?
You haven't given us anything since we all had jobs, they said!
Many hurtful words were spoken by each one and each exchange of sharp words are beyond what you can imagine, they were rebuked.
The family bonding became depressing until they kicked him out of his son's house. He can't afford living there anyway, there's no other option but to retire, so he did.
He went back to his own country bought a vehicle and lived in it.
The car sped through the dark night, it's headlights flashing,
warning the incoming traffic.
He began to bang the Traffic at a high speed level with his car,
He was uncontious
And no pulse was heard... THE END
Thank you for reading, hope you didn't got bored...
Thank for this challenge Siri @Siri123
#repostchallenge
©2021 laini1205
7th March 2021
The first writer who commented was @NabhahSprsamDiptamaforgetenhuman she's not active at present because of her studies, she's a fabulous person and writer... I missed her and all the writers who came accross with me, my writings and their wonderful creations. You may also read it at #laistory and see how the other writers react on it. It was a writco story challenge during that time so I thought of writing a unique story, as I hoped it to be.
I never imagined that I would continue writing stuffs like this. I was a bit hesitant at first, but writing became my hobby and my Outlet. An Outlet where I could express my thoughts and feelings. I hope in my own little way, you get lessons and inspirations from the topics I published on a daily basis. As one writco writer quoted once "I'm not here to impress but to express".
KICKED OUT
Have you ever heard of a father who is being kicked out of his own children's home?
Their father worked overseas so that they could have a better life and send his six children to good schools.
His children studied hard and became successful in their own fields of interests.
The eldest son graduated, hired and also went overseas, same country his father went into
and did a good job there. Since, rent was high, so as the standard of living, they had decided to live in one roof and agreed on some terms and agreements.
And soon after... His son got married, bought his own house and everything went well for years.
Now, the wife is still in their own country and took care of the other younger siblings. They applied for scholarships because the money that the father was sending is not enough to cover all of their expenses. Luckily, they all received a scholarship grant to continue further their studies. One by one, the siblings graduated with flying colors.
Eventually, all of them, including the wife went overseas
and Lived together at the older son's house,
since they had no baby yet,
they have decided to stay at his house.
The other siblings was hired by some big companies,
earn as much as they needed,
became wealthy, can afford stuff,
can travel and so forth.
Lived Successfully,
Lived on their own separately.
The eldest son thought that they would be happy because their lives were better than before.
They suspected that their father had another woman,
of course all of the sympathy goes to their mother,
they are worried because she was sad.
The mother said she saw their father communicating with someone
in a social media site,
another woman,
a younger one,
saw pictures together
and messages that boyfried-girlfriend are usually saying.
The father denied everything. Now, they asked their father how much money/savings he has.
After years of working he has no savings at all.
They question him how come?
You haven't given us anything since we all had jobs, they said!
Many hurtful words were spoken by each one and each exchange of sharp words are beyond what you can imagine, they were rebuked.
The family bonding became depressing until they kicked him out of his son's house. He can't afford living there anyway, there's no other option but to retire, so he did.
He went back to his own country bought a vehicle and lived in it.
The car sped through the dark night, it's headlights flashing,
warning the incoming traffic.
He began to bang the Traffic at a high speed level with his car,
He was uncontious
And no pulse was heard... THE END
Thank you for reading, hope you didn't got bored...
Thank for this challenge Siri @Siri123
#repostchallenge
©2021 laini1205
7th March 2021
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