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Trip to PATAL LOK : Last Part
As soon as they drowned inside the chilled greenish blue water a very bizarre voice malaised there soul. They were freezed for a while in the thoughts that what has just happened.............

CHAPTER - 6
Mr. & Mrs. Verma were completely lost that what to do next because its been more than 10 minutes and still those children didn't came out. So finally Mr.Maharsh decided to go inside after all it was their responsibility to take care of those children. So her jumped inside and unknowingly Rishi also jumped inside. Naina shouted..... RISHIIIIIII..........but the scenario was just the same. Not Naina also jumped inside. The only person who was standing there was Anshu. She was laughing dramatically...... And she instantly saw a pack of dogs coming towards her and erroneously she felt inside the water........
Few a while they all met each other inna very uncouth manner. They all looked into each other's eyes with a spark of happiness that yes!! We are all alive and together. Mr.Maharsh thanked God for there lives.
During there conversation a very indulgent person who spoke... "WELCOME TO PATAL LOK"
WHAT!!!!!!!!
They all screamed.... Together.... Again.... Looking at each other....
WHAT!!! Where the hell we are..... Rishi obstructed... Not.... Not hell!!! Look at this... It's heaven!!! Oh my God.... This is so beautifully inwroughted. The white clouds.... Such graceful flowers...its pleasant fragrance..... A palace floating over those clouds and such merciful people. I just haven't such place before. This is not Patal lok. This is heaven.
That unknown person said. No sir, seehave a look a that..... PATAL LOK was written there in the bold italic words. But it doesn't seems like any kind of Patal Lok. Because right from the childhood ever kid had an imaginary patal lok in their mind which doesn't resemble what there eyes we're looking at. It was a dreamland, something like a fairly tale.
They had a visit in that patal lok for around 2-3 hrs and that was completely beyond one's imagination. During the walk Ninu asked that unknown person that how do we go back now??? That person said there is no exist nor any entry to this lok. People come here because of some miracle and they never go back. Everyone's face become pale. And Rishi started to cry so hard and was screaming no.... No.... I want to go back.... No... No.... I want to go back.......

Abruptly his eyes opened and face was full of water and his mother was standing there I'm front of him with an empty bucket!!!!!!!!
He was clueless.... He was hopeless.... He realised it was a DREAM!!!!!!
His mother wished him a very happy birthday and gave him blessings. And said come on Rishi, get ready.... We have to go on a road trip today.... Get ready fast, your friends will be coming any time here to join us. Car is ready outside the door....

He stood up and simply said : Mom, I'm sorry, I don't want to go for any kind of road trip. I want to be here in this house it self for the whole day. Mom, none of us is going to leave this house today. We won't go anywhere and went inside his room and closed the door.........

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