I know it is bit of out of the sketch but so I could improve please drop every comments as harsh as it sounds. I will be glad to get your views so I know I'm in the right track.


One night

I heard a knock on my dorm room, it was my roommate Mickey wreaking brewery in his mouth. I was preparing for my
Morning lecture, when he stormed in holding shoes in his hands.

I didn't want to pay attention but suddenly with his slanting walk across the room caught my eye,
His bubbly mind forget to greet me as if am not there, heads to the shower turn the tap on and
Bumped to the toilet.

I rolled my eyes to see what I've left behind and to my suprise my essay which I've misplaced
Was covered by books on shelf.
Mr Ellington is a high class master in English so he's bent on looking for errors before perusing. So I hope I've picked all the words to entice his throat.

While I was lost in thoughts I heard a heavy noise coming from bathroom, it was Mickey
Calling me, hey! Roomie what
Day is it? I think am writing a test today.
Wednesday the 24th, I said, writing a test in that state?

What state?
You're wasted!
You worry too much man, the
Party was freaking awesome, all the gorgeous bitch was there.....
I can see it was awesome.
Stop being a hater dude, I got
Wasted with this new fresh girl,
Boy the shorty is hot, she steamed my body before I got laid.

Listening to his glorious story
I forgot I had a class and fifteen minutes passed not realizing I was late, as I cut in his none stop fuck up conversation.
Dude I'm late talk when I get back and check your timetable before you drown in sorrows.

Rushed to lecture room, luckily only candidates were there, so I took my sit next to this brown skin girl who I've been keeping an eye on. Her eye color was that of the setting sun, with huge brows and curly hair perfect for the face.

Through my research I've noticed she's reserved, well groomed as she was still wearing long skirts...