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Behind The Doors
This is a story when I wrote as a kid. And, I just found it in one of my draft and wanted to share with all of you since it was fun and creepy to read it.
Also forgive the Grammer since I was a kid. I feel so lazy to edit it now..
Thank you. Enjoy.
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Aika sallowed hard when her mom said her goodnight for her bed and just left her alone in her room scrolling the lights off.
She knew that it was there waiting behind the doors of the cupboard until her mom goes away from the room.She did not want to tell her mom because she knew that sometimes parent's don't believe what the kid's say for.
It thundered so louder with a heavy dreadful rain which fall to the roof with a sound of 'tuck tuck'.So heavy the rain was the drop's fallen on top of the roof probably could break the roof at any moment.
It was so dark with no lights in Aika's room.So dark.Dark has ever.Running her right hand fingers on her left arms she scratched her arms where it was irritating.She looked to the left then to the right rolling her eyes around the room.She could hear her own breath in the quite room.She felt the soberness around the surrounding.Slightly she moved herself slowly inside the blue blanket which she had been pouring on her.It was darker more inside the room and only the lightining blot which cracked in the black sky suddenly gave lights into the room twice or thrice making the room to be in vision.
She felt some chills inside her.She felt like that she was going to melt.Heart beated more faster than before.It was hard for her to inhale the oxygen into her lungs.She started sweating.Her body shivered instantly.
The doors of the cupboard creaked open slowly as it made her scared sending chills down her spine and goosebumps appear inside her.The lightining made a light flash inside the room through the window and Aika was able to see the cupboard in a clear vision.
As the cupboard opened slowly there was a crying sound which ecoed in the room so terribly.Fearing of the thing behind the cupboard Aika closed her eyes tightly.She froze.She did not want to move an inch away from the place.She knew it will get her if she do so.
The thunder rolled once again as a dark figure came out of the cupboard.It had long dark black hair which covered its face and the face was not visibly.It wore a dark grey dirty gown which had been torn at some places.Its skin was grey in colour which looked so miserable.As it came out of the cupboard a stinky smell flattered into the air making Aika close her nose with her right hand.
"Eeew"she muttered as she closed her nose.
Suddenly the cry's stopped and the surrounding became quite.So many thoughts ran inside Aika's mind.
Is the thing there?is it gone?what happened to the scary cry around the room?can i open my eyes now?
Chasing away the thoughts she slowly opened her eyes.To see there was nothing in the room except the soberness.
Where could have it gone?Is it there?Or My mind make's it up each time because of my fear?
Floating back to thought's she looked here and there around the room but nothing was at sight.
But..wait..where could have that gone?
She questioned herself as she slowly reached to the night stander to pick up her spectacle's.
There was a loud thunder which made her panick and she closed herself with the blanket.She heard her breath after the thunder was over and it had gone silent again.
Running her fingers on to her face she rubbed the tip of her nose where it itiched so much.There was a sound of something crecking which flattered through the air and made Aika alert.She stayed froze.Moving her blanket a little bit away from her face she peeked out to see.There the door's of the cupboard's were open full now.But nothing was at veiw except some of her frock's which were visible by a side because of the full moon light.
Thunder's roaring again and again it started to rain more heavier tyan before.
"La la la la laalaa.."A humming tone of a small girl spreaded into the air sending chills on Aika's spine.
Deeply looking into the cupboard she shivered.She knew it was already there by now.With a loud thunder roaring a light flashed into the room and the girl was standing near to the bed.Aika sallowed hard and the girl had disappered.
"Please.."Aika whispered to the air as another loud thuder roared and the light flashed back into the room.But this time Aika could not controll her fear when she saw the girl on top of her bed with twisted arms and legs just like a spider.Her hair covered her face and she smelt like an rotten dead body.So stinky so much that Aika could not hold her breath.
"You are never gonna escape from me!,who ever come's here will have to come with me!"the girl chanted the word's in a mixed voice.It both a male on and a female one.
As another thunder roared the girl was next to Aika.
She feared,shivered and she felt the sweat run down her face from her forehead.Her heart beated so fast as she looked at the burnt face of the girl.
The blanket's were snatched away and the girl started to pull Aika from her legs.The girl had long uncut nails which deepened into Aika's flesh oozing some blood out.
"Please leave Ow please!"she cried struggling to get out of the hold.
"Never!"the mixed voice of the girl shouted at her and pulled Aika out of the bed.
With a loud thund Aika fall on to the floor.A pain ran through her body as she knocked her to the floor.
The girl chanted some words which were not understood by Aika,dragging her towards the cupboard.
The last sound around the surrounding were the last scream's of Aika and there the cupboard was locked back in the dark room as the rain and the thunder stopped, filling the soberness around the enviorment.
And it was the end for the fear of the poor girl Aika.
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P.s.Don't forget to like and comment!:
© Hazma Razak
Also forgive the Grammer since I was a kid. I feel so lazy to edit it now..
Thank you. Enjoy.
******
Aika sallowed hard when her mom said her goodnight for her bed and just left her alone in her room scrolling the lights off.
She knew that it was there waiting behind the doors of the cupboard until her mom goes away from the room.She did not want to tell her mom because she knew that sometimes parent's don't believe what the kid's say for.
It thundered so louder with a heavy dreadful rain which fall to the roof with a sound of 'tuck tuck'.So heavy the rain was the drop's fallen on top of the roof probably could break the roof at any moment.
It was so dark with no lights in Aika's room.So dark.Dark has ever.Running her right hand fingers on her left arms she scratched her arms where it was irritating.She looked to the left then to the right rolling her eyes around the room.She could hear her own breath in the quite room.She felt the soberness around the surrounding.Slightly she moved herself slowly inside the blue blanket which she had been pouring on her.It was darker more inside the room and only the lightining blot which cracked in the black sky suddenly gave lights into the room twice or thrice making the room to be in vision.
She felt some chills inside her.She felt like that she was going to melt.Heart beated more faster than before.It was hard for her to inhale the oxygen into her lungs.She started sweating.Her body shivered instantly.
The doors of the cupboard creaked open slowly as it made her scared sending chills down her spine and goosebumps appear inside her.The lightining made a light flash inside the room through the window and Aika was able to see the cupboard in a clear vision.
As the cupboard opened slowly there was a crying sound which ecoed in the room so terribly.Fearing of the thing behind the cupboard Aika closed her eyes tightly.She froze.She did not want to move an inch away from the place.She knew it will get her if she do so.
The thunder rolled once again as a dark figure came out of the cupboard.It had long dark black hair which covered its face and the face was not visibly.It wore a dark grey dirty gown which had been torn at some places.Its skin was grey in colour which looked so miserable.As it came out of the cupboard a stinky smell flattered into the air making Aika close her nose with her right hand.
"Eeew"she muttered as she closed her nose.
Suddenly the cry's stopped and the surrounding became quite.So many thoughts ran inside Aika's mind.
Is the thing there?is it gone?what happened to the scary cry around the room?can i open my eyes now?
Chasing away the thoughts she slowly opened her eyes.To see there was nothing in the room except the soberness.
Where could have it gone?Is it there?Or My mind make's it up each time because of my fear?
Floating back to thought's she looked here and there around the room but nothing was at sight.
But..wait..where could have that gone?
She questioned herself as she slowly reached to the night stander to pick up her spectacle's.
There was a loud thunder which made her panick and she closed herself with the blanket.She heard her breath after the thunder was over and it had gone silent again.
Running her fingers on to her face she rubbed the tip of her nose where it itiched so much.There was a sound of something crecking which flattered through the air and made Aika alert.She stayed froze.Moving her blanket a little bit away from her face she peeked out to see.There the door's of the cupboard's were open full now.But nothing was at veiw except some of her frock's which were visible by a side because of the full moon light.
Thunder's roaring again and again it started to rain more heavier tyan before.
"La la la la laalaa.."A humming tone of a small girl spreaded into the air sending chills on Aika's spine.
Deeply looking into the cupboard she shivered.She knew it was already there by now.With a loud thunder roaring a light flashed into the room and the girl was standing near to the bed.Aika sallowed hard and the girl had disappered.
"Please.."Aika whispered to the air as another loud thuder roared and the light flashed back into the room.But this time Aika could not controll her fear when she saw the girl on top of her bed with twisted arms and legs just like a spider.Her hair covered her face and she smelt like an rotten dead body.So stinky so much that Aika could not hold her breath.
"You are never gonna escape from me!,who ever come's here will have to come with me!"the girl chanted the word's in a mixed voice.It both a male on and a female one.
As another thunder roared the girl was next to Aika.
She feared,shivered and she felt the sweat run down her face from her forehead.Her heart beated so fast as she looked at the burnt face of the girl.
The blanket's were snatched away and the girl started to pull Aika from her legs.The girl had long uncut nails which deepened into Aika's flesh oozing some blood out.
"Please leave Ow please!"she cried struggling to get out of the hold.
"Never!"the mixed voice of the girl shouted at her and pulled Aika out of the bed.
With a loud thund Aika fall on to the floor.A pain ran through her body as she knocked her to the floor.
The girl chanted some words which were not understood by Aika,dragging her towards the cupboard.
The last sound around the surrounding were the last scream's of Aika and there the cupboard was locked back in the dark room as the rain and the thunder stopped, filling the soberness around the enviorment.
And it was the end for the fear of the poor girl Aika.
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P.s.Don't forget to like and comment!:
© Hazma Razak
