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Ryan?
Write a short story where the protagonist has a doppelganger. #doppelganger

"how have you been? Ryan..."I ask while looking at him in the eye, as I observe him glance at the window of this coffee shop I noticed how happy he is right now.. and it looks like he already moved on

" I'm good... How about you? " he ask and turn his head to face me

"I'm good" I took a sip at my coffee and look at the window, I saw in my peripherals that he also did the same

"it's been a while" I said and the tears in my eyes that I've been holding for a long time slowly fell down.. I didn't know that he could easily move on because he always love me.. and how can he move on in just a weeks.. it's still fresh for me but how? after an 11 years with him he just took a weeks to move on.. unbelievable

so it looks like there's nothing to talk to him anymore I can see how happy he is.. I planned to get back with him but I think I'm too late..

"that's it.. sorry for asking you out I'm just.. c-checking on you.. I'll go now" as I fix my bag and was about to turn around he slowly pull my hands.. I can feel how cold his hand right now.

"hm.. yes?! " I ask and look at him I saw a smile that I've never seen before.. it's not that excited or a grin but there's something in his smile.. it's not creepy not scary but there's something.. I can't explain

"how about we go to my house? I Move out since.. we have so much bad memories on that house and my mom want you to visit her" I felt a little hope when he ask me about that.. maybe we can fix this together again.. I just hope..

we directly go to the parking lot and noticed that hi brought a new car huh

"nice car" I said and smile at him

"yeah I just bought it yesterday" he said and start the engine of the car.. we drove safely and when we arrived at his house I felt a chill in my spine going down into my whole body.. his house is uhmm.. quite old

"ah don't worry, I just need to renovate it" he said when he noticed the expression painted at my face.

we enter inside and I felt another chill in my whole body

"here, I still didn't put the heater since I need to fix some electricity in this house" he said while putting his jacket around me

I sit down and look at my phone, and it's already 8:30pm..wait? there's no signal here? ah nvm

"just wait I'll call mom in the upstairs, and get us some foods okay? " he said and I nodded at him.

my phone suddenly vibrate and I look at the message and I... I felt a goosebumps in my whole body.. it's ryan wait how??? he's upstairs

"don't be panick, I'm not the one who's with you rightnow send my your address I'm calling the police, TRUST ME THAT'S NOT ME KEEP CALM DON'T PANICK DON'T LET HIM KNOW THAT YOU KNEW, WAIT FOR A TIMING AND ESCAPE THERE QUICK, REMEMBER WHAT I TOLD YOU BEFORE? THE STUNPEN I GAVE YOU? DO YOU HAVE IT?!!! DON'T LOSE IT AND THAT'S THE ONLY WEAPON YOU HAVE CAREFUL... I LOVE YOU" my eyes widen and I gasp when i rad the message.. wait act cool

I look around and I noticed that this place.. seems.. seems to be like an abandon house

"Miah, wait mom is as sleep so I'll just make a food for us" he spoke and I felt like there's a rock stucked in my throat I couldn't even speak a word

"miah?.. " and he calls me again.. and his voice is.. iss got deeper and it chills my whole body and soul

I gave him a forced smile and nodd

I close my eyes trying to play cool.. i-i need to get out of here now.. immediately!! I need to get out of here no... p-please help me I need to get out

"you can't get out of here" I felt like a statue when I felt his breath beneath my ear.. i-i couldn't move my whole body

I feel something.. a cold and.. a sharp thing that touches my skin

"this is your end game mylove"

and just a move of his hand.... everything turned black.



© Trish Rflo