reading sample : asher (from murders truth I) (en version)
This is a reading sample for one Main character (Asher Rivers) with cutted Text passages from my novel 'Murder's Truth'. Enjoy it and I hope for Feedback. First novel Ive ever written.
Asher Rivers took a deep breath once again. This wouldn't be easy. The treasures of the Council were guarded more fiercely than the President himself, and their security systems were far more advanced than those at the government headquarters.
But he needed the money. Not for himself, but for his family's survival. If he succeeded, they would never have to go hungry during the winter months again. They could afford a fireplace, and wood too, maybe even more than one meal a day.
-some scenes later ...-
Smiling, he took the keychain from the guard and entered the building complex, dimly lit by neon tubes. Before him stretched a long corridor, its end indiscernible. Silence enveloped the place, with only the occasional...
Asher Rivers took a deep breath once again. This wouldn't be easy. The treasures of the Council were guarded more fiercely than the President himself, and their security systems were far more advanced than those at the government headquarters.
But he needed the money. Not for himself, but for his family's survival. If he succeeded, they would never have to go hungry during the winter months again. They could afford a fireplace, and wood too, maybe even more than one meal a day.
-some scenes later ...-
Smiling, he took the keychain from the guard and entered the building complex, dimly lit by neon tubes. Before him stretched a long corridor, its end indiscernible. Silence enveloped the place, with only the occasional...