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Detective Desouza's first case : House at the end of street PART 1
Hello guys ! presenting you my first part of the thriller fictional story book titled "Detective A. Desouza and his thrilling cases"Hope you liked it.
CHAPTER 1 : HOUSE AT THE END OF STREET
"Hey adi what are you doing at my house at 4 am morning . Isn't it too early to discuss over any topic. Ok tell me what is the cause that brings you here ? "
"Aa.. how can I say in front of great detective A. Desouza , the most famous retired old intelligent detective without any single interview."
"No , young man I do not want to show off . Well I had solved 48 murder cases , 22 robbery cases and even two divorce cases. How funny divorce cases. Ha ha ha.."
"Ok young man lets hear my first case i.e the incredible case of murder : The House at the end of street."
That was a lovely morning. I was sitting at the back of my horse and feeling the beauty of nature. But after sometime the monstrous ring tone of my phone ruined my happiness. I answered the phone and got the address of my first horrible journey.
I reached the scene. It took almost 2 hours to approch. I heard people talking about a house that is present at the end of that street. My assistant and very good childhood friend christopher gave me the file. I reached the scene. How can I explain you the view of that horrible house.
The house was half burnt and the ashes were flying like taking any shapes. The house was crowded with several crows. Moving ahead I found two dead bodies both half burnt . This was really amazing that everything was having half portion burnt.
I was thinking over my brain but suddenly a half dead parrot fell over me. I got scared and lift the parrot in my hand. The parrot died by saying "House at the end of street". The place was seeming haunted more than a crime scene. I told christopher to provide me a cup of coffee.
I took the coffee and started to do inquiry about the identity of dead bodies. But the most unique thing was that nobody was going to speak a single word about that house. Then I reached the vila of an old lady . Her name was Christina. She was nearly 98 years old as her graduation certificate was hanging on the wall.
The lady got impressed by my virtue of observation. She offered me coffee. But when she knew the reason of arrival , I caught in trouble. She breaked my cup and started yelling over me.
Then I told jokingly to that lady that she was not a member of more than 100 years. Then why she was fearing. I told her that She would not fear even death.
Christina said , "Ok! officer what do you want to know about that monstrous house ? "
"Why are you calling monstrous ? Who is that lady who died ? Why everything is half burnt ?
From the authors note : Finally first part finished. So what the lady told to detective? Was the murder mystery got solved ? See in next part so soon. Keep thinking.
CHAPTER 1 : HOUSE AT THE END OF STREET
"Hey adi what are you doing at my house at 4 am morning . Isn't it too early to discuss over any topic. Ok tell me what is the cause that brings you here ? "
"Aa.. how can I say in front of great detective A. Desouza , the most famous retired old intelligent detective without any single interview."
"No , young man I do not want to show off . Well I had solved 48 murder cases , 22 robbery cases and even two divorce cases. How funny divorce cases. Ha ha ha.."
"Ok young man lets hear my first case i.e the incredible case of murder : The House at the end of street."
That was a lovely morning. I was sitting at the back of my horse and feeling the beauty of nature. But after sometime the monstrous ring tone of my phone ruined my happiness. I answered the phone and got the address of my first horrible journey.
I reached the scene. It took almost 2 hours to approch. I heard people talking about a house that is present at the end of that street. My assistant and very good childhood friend christopher gave me the file. I reached the scene. How can I explain you the view of that horrible house.
The house was half burnt and the ashes were flying like taking any shapes. The house was crowded with several crows. Moving ahead I found two dead bodies both half burnt . This was really amazing that everything was having half portion burnt.
I was thinking over my brain but suddenly a half dead parrot fell over me. I got scared and lift the parrot in my hand. The parrot died by saying "House at the end of street". The place was seeming haunted more than a crime scene. I told christopher to provide me a cup of coffee.
I took the coffee and started to do inquiry about the identity of dead bodies. But the most unique thing was that nobody was going to speak a single word about that house. Then I reached the vila of an old lady . Her name was Christina. She was nearly 98 years old as her graduation certificate was hanging on the wall.
The lady got impressed by my virtue of observation. She offered me coffee. But when she knew the reason of arrival , I caught in trouble. She breaked my cup and started yelling over me.
Then I told jokingly to that lady that she was not a member of more than 100 years. Then why she was fearing. I told her that She would not fear even death.
Christina said , "Ok! officer what do you want to know about that monstrous house ? "
"Why are you calling monstrous ? Who is that lady who died ? Why everything is half burnt ?
From the authors note : Finally first part finished. So what the lady told to detective? Was the murder mystery got solved ? See in next part so soon. Keep thinking.
