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LORAA
​Hi . I'm Darsh . I'm a big writer . Now I written a story called "LORAA" . This story is based on true event which happened in my life .

Yes My friend LORAA was missing . We went to One small forest . We stayed in that forest for three days . " She told that she feels someone been watching her next day she was missing " . I don't know what happened within 8 hours night. Now I'm going to search her in that forest with the help of police .



In police station :

Police officer "Jangu " Came to enquire this case.

Jangu -- Ok I will come To that forest.

Darsh -- Thanks sir .

Jangu -- when this incident happened ?

Darsh -- before 3 months .

Jangu -- what ?.



Now they are traveling towards the forest . The forest is located at "Karnataka " . It is the continuation of "western Ghats ".



Jangu -- Ok. Tell about "LORAA " .

Darsh -- Ok.



LORAA she is my close friend , not only friend we planed to Marry next week . We went to Karnataka for Researching that forest . In that forest there was a Big house .

We went inside that house. That house was very beautiful . We stayed in that house for three days after three days . She told that "she feels someone been watching her and next day she was missing".

I searched her in that forest but she was not there.



Darsh -- sir! Let's call special force .

Jangu -- yes . They are on the way.

Darsh -- Ok.



They are going in "Mahindra thar Jeep ".

Jangu -- Do you love LORAA ?.

Darsh -- yes.



Darsh cried 😭 .

Darsh -- I missed her . I love you Loraa .

Jangu -- Don't cry .



They came to "Karnataka " .

Night 10:00PM .



Near that forest entrance there was a room. Darsh and Jangu stayed in that Room .



Morning 8:00AM.

They are Ready to go inside the forest with the police special force .



Jangu -- Let's go .

Darsh -- Yes .



They are going in "Forest jeep " . They got permission from the forest department .



There was a small village near the forest . The peoples who living in that village are doing Agriculture only .



In Small village :

There was an women . She told about that forest . And she told go safe and Return back safe .

Jangu -- Ok. Bye .



They started their trip. They are going inside the forest .



In entrance of the forest there was a Big house . Darsh , Jangu and police special force went inside that house .



In the house :

Jangu -- Ok . Today night alone let's stay in this house .

Darsh -- I aldready stayed ! Ok . Let's stay .

Jangu -- Then ok .



Night 8:00PM .



They are cooking outside . With the dry steam of the tree . They cooked fish .



Darsh was sitting near the tree and feeling about LORAA . Jangu came near .

Jangu -- Darsh !.

Darsh -- sir .

Jangu -- Don't cry . Ok . Tell about LORAA and your love.

Darsh -- Ok . Sir .



First I meet her on my office. She is newly joined to my office . I gave training to her . Then only I came to know about her " she doesn't have parents and family " .

One project came. So only we came here .



Darsh -- Bye! I wanto sleep .

Jangu -- Ok . Bye . Go and sleep .



Night 10 :00PM .

They all are sleeping . That time one Black Panther looking for its prey .

The eyes of the black panther looks different colour . And that black panther jumped on the Roof top of the house .

After few seconds that black panther was dead .

And it changed into skeleton . More animals came like tiger, elephant, Lion and Birds . All the animals was dead and changed into skeleton .



Morning 9:00AM .

Jangu -- Good morning !.

Darsh -- Good morning .



They are ready to go deep inside the forest .

Jangu -- Today we will find LORAA .

Darsh -- Ok. I will also help you .

Jangu -- Yah sure .



Police special force officers started their Jeep . They are 20 members .

Jangu -- Ok. Let's go .



They are moving inside the forest . That time "black panther skeleton came infront of the Jeep".



Jangu -- stop the Jeep . Special force " Load the gun" .

Special force officers -- Yes ! Sir .



It came to attack .

Jangu -- shoot😡 ! .



Special force officers started to Shoot the Skeleton .

Back of them more Skeleton came . Darsh also started to Shoot !.



But that skeleton killed 5 special force officers .

Jangu -- RUN . RUN .RUN . Start the Jeep .



Special force officers are Running to start the Jeep. They came near to the Jeep but they didn't start the Jeep . They are standing like a statue .



Jangu -- start the Jeep !.

Darsh -- Jangu ! Don't go near to them .

Jangu -- why ?.

Darsh -- Come back.



Their eyeballs become different colour . They are shouting like a Zombie .

Special force officers kicked Jangu .

Jangu -- why are you beating me!.

Darsh -- Jangu! Don't go near . Somebody controlling them .

Jangu -- Darsh ! Shoot them .



They are attacking Jangu and Darsh . DARSH TOOK GUN FROM THE JEEP . AND HE SHOOTED THE POLICE SPECIAL OFFICERS . They all are dead.



Darsh -- I think somebody controlling them .

Jangu -- I don't know what happening here .

Darsh -- they all are dead. With whom help we are going to search LORAA .



All the dead bodies become Skeleton like the black panther . That skeleton came to attack Jangu and Darsh .



Jangu -- Darsh ! RUN . RUN . RUN .AND START THE JEEP .



Darsh -- Ok .



Darsh started the Jeep and he started to move. Jangu also came into the jeep .

Jangu -- Go . GO . GO .

Darsh -- Ok .

Jangu -- something is wrong .

Darsh -- Yes . Wait and see there are more traps like this .

Jangu -- I'm Ready to face it .

Darsh -- that skeleton was not dead still alive. They will come !.

Jangu -- Let's see them .





NIGHT 11:00PM .

Jangu -- Darsh ! Don't stop the car .

Darsh -- Ok.

Jangu -- keep on driving .

Darsh -- Ok . I think we came deep inside the forest .

Jangu -- Yes. I know . Don't stop the car .

Darsh -- there was low petrol in the Jeep .

Jangu -- please go slow and don't STOP the Jeep .

Darsh -- Ok .



Morning 7:00AM .

Jangu -- what is the time ?.

Darsh -- 7:00AM .



No petrol in the Jeep so Jeep stopped automatically .

Darsh -- No petrol .

Jangu -- Ok . Let's walk .

Darsh -- Can I take some weapons .



Some forest dwellers are searching their prey .

Darsh and Jangu sawn them .

Jangu -- walk carefully .

Darsh -- Yes !.



Darsh Heared that LORAA was shouting . Darsh taught that LORAA was inside the forest dweller's house .

Darsh -- Jangu! This is LORAA'S Voice .

Jangu -- Ok . Come let's go and search her.



Without the knowledge of Forest dweller , Darsh and Jangu went inside the Forest dweller's house.



Inside the House :

Darsh -- LORAA! LORAA! Where are you ?.

Jangu -- LORAA! Where are you?.

LORAA -- I'm here!.

Darsh -- Loraa! How are you?.

LORAA -- Turn back and see.



Somebody beat DARSH AND JANGU From backside of them . He sprayed the spray on DARSH AND JANGU'S Eyes . Both of them slept well .

He is BHARMA Big Magician.

He kidnapped LORAA because he will not eat food . He will eat only humans so he planned to eat LORAA . But he is not hungry . 5 months once only he will eat humans .



BHARMA -- LORAA ! I got extra two preys .

LORAA -- YES !.



Now LORAA Was under the control of BHRAMA . LORAA'S eyeball is in different colour .



Outside all the forest dwellers are came to kill BHARMA because last week he killed 12 forest dwellers . So only they came to kill BHARMA .



BHARMA -- Ha! Ha ! Ha ! Ha! .

LORAA -- HA ! HA ! HA !.





BHARMA WENT OUTSIDE TO KILL ALL THE FOREST DWELLERS .



Outside :

BHARMA -- COME !.

They came to kill BHARMA . BHARMA used his magical power to attack them .

They are 3000 members . BHARMA came single to fight with them .



Inside the House :

Darsh -- what happened ?.

LORAA -- DARSH! Save me something is happening in my body .

Darsh -- Ok . Come let's escape .

LORAA -- OK . COME ! .



That house was an mysterious house because there is no exit . The exit knows only for BHARMA .



BHARMA CAME IN .

JANGU KICKED BHARMA.

BHARMA -- HA! HA ! HA !.

Jangu -- I wanto go out or I will shoot you.

BHARMA -- Ha ! Ha ! Ha!.



BHARMA just pushed Jangu . Jangu fallen down in the next Room .

BHARMA -- Where is my LORAA ?.



Now LORAA'S Eye colour was changed . NOW LORAA CHANGED .

Darsh -- RUN ! RUN ! RUN !.

LORAA -- I WILL KILL YOU !.

Darsh -- LORAA !.

LORAA Was flying on the air . And LORAA Beat DARSH .



ANOTHER SIDE . JANGU SHOOTED BHARMA . AND BHARMA WAS DEAD .

This side . LORAA WAS TRYING TO KILL DARSH .



JANGU CAME NEAR TO DARSH . LORAA WAS TRYING TO KILL DARSH . BUT JANGU SHOOTED LORAA . LORAA ALSO DEAD .



Darsh cried 😭 .

Jangu -- She is not LORAA . Come let's escape .

Darsh -- without LORAA ! I will not come .

Jangu -- LORAA is a bad girl . She stayed 3 months with BHARMA . NOW SHE IS PREGNENT .



Darsh got angry .

Darsh was fighting with JANGU . JANGU got angry and he shooted DARSH . DARSH ALSO DEAD .



JANGU WAS RUNNING TO FIND THE EXIT .

BHARMA CAME ALIVE , LORAA ALSO CAME ALIVE AND DARSH ALSO CAME ALIVE . THEIR EYEBALLS CHANGED INTO DIFFERENT COLOUR .

DARSH , BHARMA AND LORAA KILLED JANGU.

JANGU SHOUTED .














Morning 10 :00 AM .

PRESENT DAY .

JANGU IS WAKE-UPING FROM HIS BEAD . FROM THE BEGINNING IT IS JUST A "DREAM ".

LORAA WAS WIFE OF JANGU .

JANGU -- LORAA ! do you know a person called "DARSH ".

LORAA -- He is my boyfriend . When I'm studying in my college he is my LOVER .

Jangu -- Now where he will be ?.

LORAA -- He become a big "MAGICIAN ".

JANGU -- Do you love him ?.

LORAA -- YES . TILL NOW I'M LOVING HIM.

Jangu -- Ok.

LORAA -- One day he will come and meet me! .

JANGU -- OK . LET HIM COME . I ALSO WANTO MEET HIM .





IN A DARK FOREST :

Darsh was eating a Big Lion .

DARSH -- HA ! HA ! HA ! .





WHAT GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT ? AND WHAT IS THE STORY ?

LET SEE IN NEXT PART .



LORAA 2 coming soon .









Written by

Indian writer
Darshan⚔️