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Heroes Dawn chapter 1
Years ago a hight tech prison had a huge explosian.Energy signals beyond anything we cold imagine.The prison was a front for a mutant testing facility.From that day on people with super powers became the norm.Strength,speed...Power.We had them before the explosiam but we didnt have...him.If we had known how much our lives would have changed.Things wouldve been diffrent.This is the story of Guy.He was the greadest hero of all time

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an orignal idea written by gabriel swanepoel


Heroes



"My name is Metal.Well my name was Steve.Its been so long since Ive heard my real full name.When I was five I was hunted down.Three of the people in my town had shown powers.Mine was the amazing power of...turning my skin into iron...steel,metal any type of it.But I have a scondary power.Frost lets me create ice.I cant use it though.I ran and ended up in this place.A city within a dome.Food grows here and it still somehow rains.The dome stretches high and no one knows where it came from.The so called prison was in the dome.So were heroes and villians.Like a classic comic book.I joined a group of superhumans named heroes.It started with a great hero named Stronghold.He had super strength and started the group after saving the city.Were called Heroes.We save and protect against great villians.Schools and places decided to not teach about superpowers.The goverment illegalised it and we did our job as viggilanties.People with powers dont want to become heroes they only want to be villians.Now you onow the world we live in.But Im not the one in this story.Im in a group of heroes and the most mighty hero of all was born on that morning."

A man with a black hoodie and long black jeans reads a magazine.He had eyes the colour of ice and brown hair.He leans against a wall
"You hear about the explosian."
Another type of man says.A man a little bigger than normal with four arms and is made completely out of rock or stone.Types of gauntlets around his arms that are a part of his body.He sits lifting insanely heavy weights while talking to the hooded man.
"Yeah its all over the news.Some big fight and people escaped.Ruble and stuff is still being sent through a river toward the city."
"Think we should go help out?"
"Rock we dont community service.Were heroes not prisoners."
"I know that metal but we cant just leave it all be."
The hooded man sighs.He stops leaning from the wall and puts down his magazine.He takes down his hood and as his eyes shine in the sunlight grazing through a nearby window.
"Aww you guys going out?"
A man yells.He looks mostly small and has white hair with green eyes.No specific power can be seen through his body normally.He plays with an nintendo while lying on a couch.He seems childish but is much older.
"Enjoy."
A woman sitting oppisite the boyish man says in a low voice.She had pink hair and eyes and wears all black.She flips through a magazine.
"Not suiting up for only this."Metal says
"Fine then.Lets go."Rock says
The two go outside and reveal the live in an old seawidsh control building.Below ut is only foot level water.A distance away a huge city.Titled Hero city.It stretches as far as the eye can see.To the right is a type of gateway and around them is a huge glass looking dome.It is acctually very powerfull.To the left is a flat area that looks like a fighting arena without stands.Behind it,it is against a dome.
Metal and Rock run on the fighting platform as big as it is following the low hanging river/sewage area below it.Its between the city and the platform.As they run toward the left side of them and reach the end of the platform they see reckage stuck on the platform and flowing further down the river behind the two.

Before we continue a better description of the location as its important.To the north is a huge city for the most of NE and NW.To the south is only a huge platform that starts at the edge of the city with a small gap.The platform is of unknown origin and it is extremely strong.No hero can destroy it in all their effort.To the west is nothing but dome and SW a tall mountin named "the great eclipse."To the SE is a type of closed door insanely huge and also unknown origin.It looks mechanical and the people of hero city are not devolved.Their as caught up as us with powers.Only 30% of the city have powers.The caracters

metal:brown hair ice blue eyes and two powers to turn into any metal and create ice but has no control.He is about 21

rock:An elemental with no hair and is made of rock.He can control rock and make weopons of rock.He loves martial arts and he is powerfull in combat and defence.He is immortal in age and people state he is wise and ober 1000 years old

Shale:The boyish chils.White hair and wise green eyes.He is 18 but acts as a child.He is short and has the power to make metal wings out of his back.He can shoot metal knifes and one of his main power with this is that he can use the wings shield himself.

Aura:A woman who no one knows much about.Her power is unlimited and uncontrolled.She can make a huge pink aura around her and use telepathy and shoot power beams.Pink hair and eyes she is about 21

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Metal looks down and see's a man.About 22 lying on one of the rock with bruuses and cuts.
"Rock!"
Metal calls him.They lie him down and try to see if he's alive.Metal feels his pulse and realises he is alive.He tries to wake him up and succeeds.He has very long brown hair touching his shoulders with dark blue eyes.He just opens his eyes crunching them from the sun as he looks up at them
"...Who...am I?"
He asks in a dry half deep voice.His body is bruised and has cuts the size of his hand on his chest,back,arms and legs.He has amnesia and he is the hero of this story character.Metal and Rock take him too their base and treat him with food and water.They lie him down on a couch with bandages,a blanket and a fresh pair of clothes.He dreams of a huge explosian and a woman shooting crystals down on the floor.He opens his eyes and scares upright.He rubs his face and cant remember anything but the basic needs to walk and speak.He stands up and dresses only in a pair of too long light blue long sleeved pants.He looks in a mirror and takes a pair of scissors cutting his hair to foreheads length.Its open at his forehead and is around the rest of his head the length of a finger with a small curl.He hears a conversation muffeld in the other room.He walks in still trying to remember his own name.He opens the door and as everyone is silent he stares a confused expression toward them.
"Umm...sorry to bother you but...might you know my name?"
"Heeeyyyy...guy we were just talking about you."
Rock says in a scratchy voice.Metal crossing his arms shakes his head.Shale laughs
"My name is guy?"
"No...we'll just call you that for now.Im rock this is Metal,Shale and Aura.We are all heroes.Do you remember anything.
Guy stands back and allot of his memories come back.He remembers being raised in a village with his father and mother till the age of 18 when it was attacked.Everything come back accept for what happend after those few years till now.He still cant remember his name for some reason.
"I remember some stuff but...the last few years are stuffy..."
"Last few what?..."
Rock asks in a cracky voice.Metal shakes his head and Shane laughs.Aura gives no reaction.Guy sits down and his bandage on his chest falls of revealling no wound or even a scarr.The group looked shocked and sit down to speak with him.He tells about his past and some things he remembers.

Meanwhile some elementals plot.A elemental with wings and a body of lava.Another made of rock but brighter colours and only two arms and horns.
"Thats where these guys are living?Pathetic!"
The rock elemental says in a cracky voice.
"We are here to take revenge on that bloody metal man and your brother.Remember your goals Sharkav!"
"Yeah Yeah.Lets go."
The two stand on the platform before the building they are in.The elemental of lava flies up and then after being high enough bullet dives down toward the building.He breaks through the roof and Rock blocks his punch.He gets pushed back quite a bit but holds his ground.He frowns and speaks in a deep voice.Aura and Shane stand on guard keeping guy behind them.Metal in his metal form stand behind rock waiting for a fight.
"What do you want from us lava moth?"
"I dont go by that silly name.I am here for only revenge against you Metal!"
He yells in a slow voice looking at Metal.Metal smiles and says
"You got a rematch then lava moth."
The oyher elemental breaks through the wall and punches Metal.He blocks it and gets pushed back.
"Brother how nice of you to syop by."
Rock says
"Recka your wasting your life protecting and saving these humans.Become the king of the earth and destroy these redchid species!"
The other yells.
"My name is rock now.I am a proud hero and I will not be one of your rebelion of villians!"
Rock yells.He breaks away the block hitting the other elemental outside and lifts a rock wall from the ground.He pushes it into his brother shooting him out of the building also outside.Rock runs to his brother and metal toward Lava moth.He jumps out of the hole and punches downward toward The moth in his metal form.Lava mothe dodges backward just in time.Metal recovers from the hit and tears off his hoodie.The moth flies toward him and gives multible punches.Metal takes each of them with ease and eventaully decides to grb moth's hand and throw him into the wall of the building beside them.Moth realises he cant fase metal with just punches so he decides to shoot lavat out of his hands toward him.Metal blocks and gets pushed back by it.His arms melt a bit too but he jusy gets pushed back and maintains power.Afyer a while moth stops and decides to fly upward.Metal tries to stop him bit realises the lava stuck his feet in the ground.Moth flies down again toward the building and through the roof.He tries to punch anyone he can and lands on guy fmbefore Shale or Aura could react.Tbey bothe get scared and turn around.Dust settles and reveals guy holding moth's fist in his hand.red lightning like energy shooting around him.He then twists his fist and opens his red eyes with snake pupils.It send chills down the moth's spine.Guy then throws him through the wall.He jumps down to him and Lava moth flies away screaming in terror.Guy doesnt even look like himself.He hears a shriek scream from Rock's brother come from the other side of the wall.He runs there with incredible speed.As fast as a bullet train.He stops himself leaving a trace of red lightning behind him.Rock and his brother are fighting and Rock is holding his brother in cuffs.Guy blinks and his eyes go open with their blue color.Rock looks at Guy in shock.As do Metal,Shale and Aura.Guy shakes and looks at his hands not knowing what happend.He falls to his knee's and Rock makes a police drop off with his brother dropping him on the edge of the city.Metal gets set free and cant stop thinkong of how he had messed up.Shale and Aura take guy inside.He is still paralised.A long while passes.Guy is given clothes,food and some blankets.

Metal walks past Guy rubbing his head and says
"Listen...that thing you did today...you have some crazy powers.We could use someone like you."
"Why are you giys giving me all this..."
"What?"
"You barely know me.You find me on the side of a river and let me stay here.I barely anything about myself.Yet your just going to let me stay here for no reason why?"
"Because were heroes.We help those in need and you sure as hell are in need.You have something to do with that explosian the other day and you have some kind of power.Right now if your memory come back your only a lead nothing more or less.But your strong.I know things in your kind are probably messed up right now.No control over what you know and only slight memories.But heroes are scarse and we need someone like you Guy.Sleep on it.Tommorow we start fresh.We learn more about you try and trigger your memories and test your power."
"Heroes...Th...thank you so much."
A tear rolls down Guy's cheek.Metal cant help it feel sorry for him.
Metal smiles as he walks away smugly.
Guy tries to sleep still socked as to why they let him stay.He sleeps anyway his mind filt with questions.

Guy dreams once again.A man standing there with big muscles and no face.Its blankt oit by shadow almost like guy's real name.
"Power on...hero."
As the word hero are said they echo.Guy remembers the word going back in his mind.He remembers a time not fully but a little girl and a bully.Before he can remember he gets scared awake early in the motning.He sits upright and looks around.He takes some clothes and decides he's going to leave.He walks into the living toom and see's Metal there.He bows down with his arms at his side and says
"Thank you for letting me stay but...I cant just stay here.You dont know me and I dont know you.Im leaving."
He stands upright and walks out the door.
Metal sighs and then whispers to himself
"Moron..."
As Guy walks out he's confonted by the voice of rock on the roof above him
"Guy!"
He looks up and Rock stands there arms crossed looking angry.Guy has his arms next to his side and wants to say he's leaving but is cut off by Rock
"Sorry but I..."
"Shut up for a second.Listen Guy you have potensial.You have something about you I could sense from the first time I saw youCome with us and try being a her..."
"Why the hell would a bunch of strangers find some guy and all they damn talk about is being a hero!!"
Guy snaps
"Because its necessarry.This city's crime rates rise every damn day.Were the only heroes here.We cant protect everyone and we need someone as powerfull as you on our side.We'll help you retrieve your memories and you'll be able to help us."
"Why in my right mind would I do that!?"
"You leave me no choice then.Guy you are under arrest for being a suspect of the DR.Curio prison explosian.If you come back and do not resist this would be allot easier."
"Oh yeah...and what the hell if I decide to leave?"
Rock shakes his head and jumps down to him.He uncrosses his arms and looks him in the eyes.Guy freezes until eventually gathering enough corage to try and punch Rock.Rock catches his fist and grips it tight.He looks guy dead in the eyes and says
"I'll make you come back."
He lifts guy into the air with his arm and using only one punch from his other arm punches him in the stomach.Guy coughs up spit.Rock drops him and Guy falls into a ball on the ground still coughing catching his breath.Rock comes up behind him and makes a pair of rock handcuffs.He mends them onto guy's arms then whispers in his ear
"Your a suspect now.Nothing more nothing less.Good luck in the questioning room."He smiles as he walks away with guy in cuffs.He hums while dragging him.He throws him onto a metal chair in an mostly empty room.White walls black floor and roof.No windows one old flickering light and two doors behind him and infront of him both locked.One metal tabel and two chairs.He sits on one and there is another one oppisite him empty.

Meanwhile the group of heroes have a meeting in the living room.
"He's strong too strong to let go.If those vilians get him in their hands were screwed."
Metal states.
"So were just gonna keep him here against his will for no good reason?"
Aura asks.
"There is good reason he's a suspect.He also has allot of potensial.We have to do something with him now though.We have to vote.What do we do with Guy?"
Rock asks and silence fills the room

to be continued...

Hey Hey writer here thanks so much for reading if you enjoy go check out some of my other stuff.Oh and this was just and intro chapter.Through chapter 2 will make more sense of the characters story and make it better.I know this chapter was kind of a mess up but please give heroes a chance.A rocky start to and iron finish!

THANK YOU ALL FOR READING.YOUR AMAZING AND I HOPE HEROES CHAPTER 2 GETS BETTER

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