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Please Don't Take My Shianna..
Sorry for the grammatical errors in this story, I'll try my best to improve it..

Warning: Rape, Pedophilia, murder








Tristan is Shianna's older brother..
They both lost their parents since three years ago..
Now..

Tristan is seventeen and her precious baby sister is just eight years old..
One day..

It was two in the morning..
Tristan was awaken by a loud thud and her sister shouting from her room..

He panicked, and immediately ran to her room.. Her room is literally a hallway away from his so it took him time..

When he got there, his sister was no where to be found.. But the window was left open..

The pure devastation and worry that was combining into his emotions is enough to drive someone insane..

Due to his overloading wrath, tears starting to form in his eyes..

His mind could only think of someone to blame..

Someone, probably a mafia member offered them to work them in exchange for money..

But they turned it down.. Since they both knew that their parents won't like if they accepted the offer..

Now.. For the price that they had to pay for it is.. His sister.. His most priced possession..

Now where can he find them?
He was in trouble in trying to find a location on where he can find her..

Then, a merely erased memory came to his mind..

"If you change your mind you know where to find me" The man told them..
He knew where to find him..

He went to an abandoned grave yard merely four in the morning..
He marched his way hastily into a dark and sketchy spot in there..

There he saw something that weakened his whole body, and making him tremble in a feeling that is mixing in him.. Anger and sadness..

He saw his little sister, sitting there..
With her eyes rolled backin severe pain, a huge hole in her stomach and heart, and white fluids coming out of her private part..

The over flowing of tears was coming out of his frightened eyes.. His eyes shattered..

They didn't just killed her.. They also raped her, mercilessly..
He fell into his knees infront of the sight of his lifeless little sister..

He began to blame him self..
It drove him.. Insane..

He buried her.. Now.. He's seeking revenge.. But her never knew who did it.. Well he knew but he don't know where..

The feeling of incompleteness because he didn't avenge her continued to light up his madness day by day..

They took what he has left of him..

He grabbed his beige colored sweater, and wore a normal black surgical mask..... and a knife..

He went to a crowded city in the night and walked in the middle of happy people..

He went to a particular alley where the crowd couldn't reach them and there he saw a young of siblings..

A boy and a girl.. They looked like they weren't even in the age of fourteen..

And looks like the young boy was older than the other.. He was behind the two who was walking peacefully..

It reminds him of his little sister and him.. It drove him severe anger..
It's not because he saw someone having a little sister and not her being murdered..

He's angry at himself, but he couldn't kill himself so he just threw it out to someone he reminds him of him and his sister..

And those two remind him of him and Shianna..
He ran to the boy and immediately slit his throat...

The younger girl saw it.. She was shaking like crazy.. He looked at her and walked towards her..
The girl won't recognize him so he didn't worry..

He pulled out a lollipop and a queen of hearts and gave it to her and left..

And that's the birth of the "Card killer" (didn't have time to think of a good name) he is used to murder the eldest sibling in a pair of siblings and gave the other one a face or a number card with a lollipop and leave..

It's been three years and now.. He got caught and was paid to be in a electrical chair..

In the moment he gonna be executed was.. They heard him playing a tune and a mail in his bed..

The tune goes like "Please don't take my Shianna away.." Over and over again in the tune of "you are my sunshine"

The cops wondered who is Shianna but didn't get too much interest in it..
And the moment he was in his chair they found a letter from him to Shianna..

"Dear Shianna..

Forgive big brother, okay? He tried his best.. And he will make sure even in the next life you are still happy..

I still remember how your white pretty hair dashed to the pretty ray of sunlight with your beaming smile pairing with it..

You'll always remain to be my sister..

Everyday i prayed you'll hear my cries and my hopes to get you back..
I hate my self for not being there for you..

Love..
Tristan.. "