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Scary Motel Story
(Warning:this story might be long)3:PM:BEFORE ARRIVING AT THE MOTEL
I was waiting in the car with my cousin. Then we started to move. It was normal. It was all ok until we got hungry. It was nearly night like six in the evening. I fall asleep in the car. When I woke up we got to drop for dinner. We are staying in a motel that my uncle purchased. I hopped in the car until I felt like something is wrong. I looked around the car. Nothing. It has been a couple hours. And then I felt like a brush at the back of neck. I thought it was a bug. So I went to sleep. I woke up we are near, we just gotta look our side. I looked at right my cousin looked left. I was looking. And then I saw this guy with like a dirty cloth and a weird face. Then my cousin said he found it.11:30 PM:ARRIVED AT THE MOTEL
We unpack our stuff and i watched TV. Then we went to a party. After the party we went home. Me and my brother went playing outside. It was kinda stupid but our parents let us have our own room at the motel. In the room it was me my cousin and my cousin little sister.
12:PM THE SCARY THING STARTS.
We then went to our room to watch TV. The motel was a bit small but there is two story. My cousin and his little sister were upstairs watching TV while I was downstairs trying to sleep. I didn't bother to lock the door cause my mom and their parents will help. I fall asleep. I woke up to see something very strange. The door was opened. I was scared. I ran to my cousin to tell them. I then locked the door. We watched TV and when to sleep. The bed was downstairs. We all sleep. Until....
3:AM THE BELL RANG
We heard what sounded like a bell. I got up and then the door knocked. I went up stairs to peek who there. It shocked me to death. The guy was looking at the small balcony where I am smiling creepily at me. I ran down to my cousin. We peek through the window he wasnt there.
3:15 AM PLAYTIMES OVER
We checked upstairs and what we saw was terrifying. The guy climbed the thing trying to enter the house through the balcony. We pushed him down and he did not look happy the motel isn't that high so it didn't damage him much. We ran downstairs grabbed my cousin sister and hid in the closet. We were crying. And then I went outside. The guy was gone at least thats what I thought. Then it sound like someone was walking at the roof. I hid in the closet back. He hopped down from the roof through the balcony and inside the motel with a knife. He search all the place. Then he walked towards the closet. We slammed open the door knocking the guy out. We ran outside and told our parents. We called the police and arrested him. We never seen him again. But what would happen if we didn't slammed the door open. That question makes me feel scared.
I was waiting in the car with my cousin. Then we started to move. It was normal. It was all ok until we got hungry. It was nearly night like six in the evening. I fall asleep in the car. When I woke up we got to drop for dinner. We are staying in a motel that my uncle purchased. I hopped in the car until I felt like something is wrong. I looked around the car. Nothing. It has been a couple hours. And then I felt like a brush at the back of neck. I thought it was a bug. So I went to sleep. I woke up we are near, we just gotta look our side. I looked at right my cousin looked left. I was looking. And then I saw this guy with like a dirty cloth and a weird face. Then my cousin said he found it.11:30 PM:ARRIVED AT THE MOTEL
We unpack our stuff and i watched TV. Then we went to a party. After the party we went home. Me and my brother went playing outside. It was kinda stupid but our parents let us have our own room at the motel. In the room it was me my cousin and my cousin little sister.
12:PM THE SCARY THING STARTS.
We then went to our room to watch TV. The motel was a bit small but there is two story. My cousin and his little sister were upstairs watching TV while I was downstairs trying to sleep. I didn't bother to lock the door cause my mom and their parents will help. I fall asleep. I woke up to see something very strange. The door was opened. I was scared. I ran to my cousin to tell them. I then locked the door. We watched TV and when to sleep. The bed was downstairs. We all sleep. Until....
3:AM THE BELL RANG
We heard what sounded like a bell. I got up and then the door knocked. I went up stairs to peek who there. It shocked me to death. The guy was looking at the small balcony where I am smiling creepily at me. I ran down to my cousin. We peek through the window he wasnt there.
3:15 AM PLAYTIMES OVER
We checked upstairs and what we saw was terrifying. The guy climbed the thing trying to enter the house through the balcony. We pushed him down and he did not look happy the motel isn't that high so it didn't damage him much. We ran downstairs grabbed my cousin sister and hid in the closet. We were crying. And then I went outside. The guy was gone at least thats what I thought. Then it sound like someone was walking at the roof. I hid in the closet back. He hopped down from the roof through the balcony and inside the motel with a knife. He search all the place. Then he walked towards the closet. We slammed open the door knocking the guy out. We ran outside and told our parents. We called the police and arrested him. We never seen him again. But what would happen if we didn't slammed the door open. That question makes me feel scared.
