A man's journey to immortal
#WritcoStoryChallenge
@vinthefuture
The painting was yellowed with rounded edges. It was a masterpiece and it was lying in my hand. Wait, have I stolen it? I don't remember...
hmm, if I don't remember do I have a problem?, Am i in a trouble? let's forget it i like the painting so I keep it..
-----After a while------
-police arrived at his room saying booyah!!! (this cop is drunk so)
open the door NPPD.
-who is it? room service?..
-Its NPPD!! new pork police department..open up!..
-alright I'm coming, in the shower I'll be in 2 minutes.
- Hurry up!!..
-----two minutes later-----
cop slept.. (he drank too much!)
he comes out after bath and wears something usual and he aproaches the door and opens it..
-who the spell are you! and why are you sleeping here?
- Zzz...
- oh you look like a cop. let me give a pillow so you could sleep well.(aparantly our main character is so kind.)
-------after slept-------
(let us put a name to our main character, dr.licker will be his name ..)
while our licker will be checking out..
meanwhile the cop will wakes up.
-thank you for staying here , come again..
-(LoL)good joke!..
-!?!!..
after that he left the place in a taxi..
taxi man:
-where about?
-take me to 'Heavenlydoor'..
..............................
( In the story Heavenlydoor is a place with no law and authority also no currency is acceptable and no person is claimed to be superior to that place with no facilities only nature is the gift to that place with lots of edibles to live
and said to be able to break the human laws and will become superior power and immortal as written in rock plate at Heavenlydoor gateway; This place is said to be guarded by angels only few people has ever gone by passing their deadly test..
Nobody are known to be familiar with the test living outside from Heavenlydoor except the only guy who managed to escape from Heavenlypunishemnt(which is death penalty if test was failed) and managed to written about the test in a crypted way on the painting while he was ill and kept in secret after death which is somehow managed to be robbed by a guy while he is drunken and that guy is our dr.licker ,he is a linguistic professor. )
...................
a cop is gathered information on this and tend to steal it from dr.licker but before he is so happy about this thing and drank too much alcohol and rest is above..
---------painting hunters----------
mr.broomstick is the leader of the group who tried to stole the painting before but failed since it was too late, this painting is already stolen.
This team got mad on themselves and cried then tried to find who is the guy fried their plan to fail. blunder women along piggy and smugy are team mates of this group. Their unhappy faces makes a group of emojis similar to unrealistic death of zombies .
--------------Cop's temper-----------
-oh crab , what the spell i have done.
Ran towards the enquiry area ..
- rno.240 the person was not there where is he?tell me quick!
-calm down sir,I'm not quick I'm bow
-I don't care who are you I'm a cop I need that information it's urgent.
-okay mr.cop let me check..
-argh..hm look it faster.
after few seconds.....
-I'm sorry mr.cop I don't see any information regarding urgent.
-are you skidding me? I'm asking where is the guy who has to be there in rno.240 .
-he is no more in rno.240 sir.
-I know that! you gummy where is he gone.
-outside mr.cop.. and I'm not a thief stop shouting on me .
cop takes sometime and with less eager asks bow
-can I see your manager ?
-give me a second.
-yes mr.cop what can i do for you?
-I need the information who stayed in your hotel at rno.240 last night and where is he left.
-I'm sorry we don't give our customer details it's confidential.
-im a cop! the person who stayed last night here in rno.240 is a thief and you should be giving the details to me!
-I'm going to need proof for that mr?
-leafblower. and here is my id.
-hm okay.
few seconds later ...
-he is dr.licker and blah blah blah ....
and ...he has gone in a private taxi we don't have the information where he headed.
-(sighs)do you have footage of it so I could see taxi number atleast.
-wait no need we have written it down for our hotel customer safety policy ,infact we do take care of customers in many ways for ensuring satisfaction and safety of customer is top priority.
-good. let me see it..
-okay sir. here take it.
-(sighs (finally)) thank you.
he with that leaves the hotel to find him he asks the control department to trace of this taxi.
------------unusual_incidents----------
an angel is cursed to lose its immortality because of its bad behaviour,it's vital powers are to control air. Angel imabad is born with this power so loosing it's immortality does not affect its powers.(All angels can sense things going on even far away. )because of bad behaviour of imabad it's divinity lost and not of a big difference to humans except to the powers it's posses.
-jamn it!. There must be someway to get back my immortality. oh wait! there is one I have to drink the divine lake's water. then I will be back to normal. since I have cursed I can't go to heavens... How? I have heard there is a divine lake on earth in Heavenlydoor,
ugh, those worthless people ...
(sighs greedly )
-Heavenlydoor I'm coming!!.
-------------cruelReality---------------
(car engine is running..)
piggy:-
I'm telling you, this guys should be pros.We can't fight a pro!, to get that painting we should have a master plan..
blunder:-
oh! please. Last time we had a plan to steal this painting which took almost a year.
mr.broom:-
that's because we had to find out where this painting is kept,It's different to our plan of how to steal it.
smugy:-
yeah,but piggy is right we have no weapons either to fight them.
mr.broom:-
don't worry, we are going to get some weapons.
smugy:-
when?
blunder:-
he said we are going, gummy!it means now.
piggy:-
I have a bad feeling about this! this going to get ugly.
** **
penny:-the vehicle is going towards south east sir..
leafblower:-
thanks penny, you are a real help everytime.
penny:-
it's my job sir..
he then ends the call ..
leafblower:-
nobody is going to save you from me dr.licker. Nobody! I'm going to shoot you away after getting the painting.
Time to get real serious!.
(with lots of ammunition he gets in the car and chase toward him.)
** **
meanwhile angel imabad will travel through a portal towards earth,and he reaches the earth.Almost midnight in a middle of city at a corner.
imabad:-
so this is earth looks like. So smelly.
I have to find a way to reach the Heavenlydoor.
--''
during the punishment the curse also cut off his wings from his body so he can't possibly fly.
"--
walking on the road imabad has no traffic sense so he walks straight to a car moving towards him .
taxi man stops the car with full power.
taximan:-
hey you! don't you see the taxi coming, move away.
-" angel sees him abruptly stares at him staying still. "-
taximan:-
you custard!!
-" taximan steps out of taxi and walks towards him and unknowingly feels fear by seeing a giant personality of angel almost 10feets standing in front of him "-
taximan:-
what the!.
-" angel holds his head like a rugby ball and reads his mind to find out how they do all stuff then he crushes his head and walks away "-
-"
imabad uses his powers and helps himself to reach the place "-
he confronts a tall entrance and by walking in about a mile he sees a portal type visual smog in front of him with a guardian statue on the right side tops a height of over 18 feets .
the angel about few steps away from gateway then a male voice starts stating: if you need to cross me one must sacrifice his own true scent to me.
the angel understands the language of the voice has been stated,since he is an angel.
he still don't care about it and moves towards crossing the guardian angel ..
A strong force stops him to not go through and slowly the statue becomes alive .
guardian angel:-
you are forbidden to enter gateway suffer the Heavenlypunsihment.
-" moves his sword to the angel. "-
imabad backs up and shocked by this angels presence which is one of strong among them.
imabad:-
I'm show you what I'm capable of ,you worthless..
imabad uses his power of air but this will has no effect on the angel.
then imabad draws his weapon. It's a double side axe with thunder summoning magic encrypted on it.
-" they starts fighting for a while releasing high amount of sound near, like a thunder "-
after a frightening fight imabad gets weaken because he is a mortal.
afraid of his death he managed to ran away once he crosses the 1 mile distance back to the entrance the guardian angel stops chasing him vanishes.
imabad sighs of being tired.
imabad:-
(he caught 's a signal out of air that of a man who might has a way to get in and coming towards there )
hmm (sighs briefly).
(he laughs a little bit as a short smile of confidence.)
----------TheChase-------------
Bushmaker:-anything else ?
Mr.broom:- it's more than enough.
Bushmaker:- you know,.These weapons are like childrens to me.Take a good care of them.
Mr.broom:- in that case, give me extra ammunition. They are too hungry everytime.
Bushmaker:- thanks for buying and make sure you get the spell out of here before i use one on you.
Mr.broom:- alright.
(Mr.broom will load weapons in trunk and gets in the car)
Piggy:-where to go?
Mr.broom:- to the Heavenlydoor.
(Mr.broom starts driving.!broom!!broom!.)
Penny:- sir taxi is heading towards hill bridge.
Cop:- I see this taxi nearby,over.
Cop started chasing dr.licker their speed hit 100 miles per hour ,cop starts firing at the taxi while driving, meanwhile out of nowhere angel imabad jumps on taxi that makes immediate stop of the taxi looking that creature dr.licker will be stunned for second and manages to get down of taxi ands starts running. Back at cop,he brakes and drifts closer to angel imabad that shook the cop freaking himself to immediately fire at angel which will show a little tickling to angel making him angry he tries to grab cop but cop quickly dodges from him and get back to his trunk to take a bigger weapon which is a machine gun.
Already loaded starts firing at angel meanwhile dr.licker tries to escape both maniacs that caught an eye of angel which changes his direction towards dr.licker .Angel running gives a little shake to this bridge which makes a passing by biker fell down nearly hitting dr.licker but making little or no damage to dr.licker by that he grabs the bike after he gives a big cash amount from his pocket to that biker (since he is kind)
Then started driving giving cop time to shoot real load of machine gun directly at him by which angel gets angry and starts focusing on cop running towards cops while cop has no ammunition left, he drops the gun and kick sombody out of a car since this mess made a traffic jam and drives closely to angel and quickly drifts away and rises his speed nearly 150miles per hour..
While this going on same road mr.broom and team will be noticing this scenario and give a boost to their vehicle hitting some vehicles away and road will be cleared to go at full speed for them.
By this going the dr.licker will almost get a melee hit to his car by the angel imabad but he stables his car without a hard time then this cop tries to keep hitting this angel by his pistol by firing bullets at him which gives sometime to speed up for dr.licker .At a close edge near a barricade a drifts will be taken by dr.licker because of the curve of the road this angel slips down the hill falling from a pretty height that could hurt him a little but falls directly on the road which in turn the dr.licker will have to pass by when he gets too close to the angel he will take a quick turn and escapes from him but cop with a top speed hits this angel at his legs which then makes angel to fell onto cars top, to get rid of him he tries to drift him away while this has been happening the team member piggy and blunder starts firing at the angel joining with dr.licker and cop in the scene with this since angel is also mortal now he gets some injuries and fell on the road side giving them time to escape for while and continuing to chase dr.licker this team has no idea what's happening there tries to kick this cops car .Dr.licker will having a freaking out experience he tries his best to escape then angel shows up again this time he uses his powers to get them.By making a tornado with his power makes climate from little cloudy to Too much cloudy that too this tornado clearly passes near to them they will have a hard time to control their vehicles then this angel draws his weapon to use thunder bolt on dr.licker's car just hitting nearby he escapes from this but still makes a great deal of damage to car then turning his car into woods to get safe he droves towards a nearby tunnel which leads to mining area of under ground,the cop and Mr boom driving towards him makes a hit a supporting wood while going in making only one thing that keeps open this tunnel will be closed while all people stuck inside except angel.This mining area is so old that has been in no use for long time.
Angel could not possibly get his way in so he waits outside to see any other way to get in.
Making all the people inside this tunnel cop tries to grab dr.licker and tries to hit him which then stopped by mr.broom and helps dr.licker that gives cop a liilte anger then fights mr.broom then smugy joins him and gives a spear to cop while this happens blunder will shout to stop this madness and to explain themselves to situation to be handled.
--------dr.licker's transformation-----
They found a way out. They took all the remaining guns along ammunition and walks out of the mine tunnel ,With the brightlight confronting them.Looking for him all around they all walk towards Heavenlydoor ...
While entering into entrance they will heard big lousy foot steps closing towards them,that's the angel they all starts firing at him with all they got eventually they are out of ammunition and runs into entrance to hide where the cursed human stones are all over place . Angel starts looking for them meanwhile,.
Mr.broom:-hey jack's back over here. Cop removes his belt and uses as a grapple on ankle of angel and tries to drag with every ounce in his body piggy joins with cop and tries to drag along while angel feels nothing he steps towards mr.broom dragging both of them along. With this happening smugy with his spear at legs works out and angel fells down towards his front while angel trying to stand up blunder with a firm stick starts hitting at angel head repeatedly faster shouting DIE custard! Die..
due to limit reached the remaining is posted on
- A man's journey to immortal extended. -
#next #fiction
@vinthefuture
The painting was yellowed with rounded edges. It was a masterpiece and it was lying in my hand. Wait, have I stolen it? I don't remember...
hmm, if I don't remember do I have a problem?, Am i in a trouble? let's forget it i like the painting so I keep it..
-----After a while------
-police arrived at his room saying booyah!!! (this cop is drunk so)
open the door NPPD.
-who is it? room service?..
-Its NPPD!! new pork police department..open up!..
-alright I'm coming, in the shower I'll be in 2 minutes.
- Hurry up!!..
-----two minutes later-----
cop slept.. (he drank too much!)
he comes out after bath and wears something usual and he aproaches the door and opens it..
-who the spell are you! and why are you sleeping here?
- Zzz...
- oh you look like a cop. let me give a pillow so you could sleep well.(aparantly our main character is so kind.)
-------after slept-------
(let us put a name to our main character, dr.licker will be his name ..)
while our licker will be checking out..
meanwhile the cop will wakes up.
-thank you for staying here , come again..
-(LoL)good joke!..
-!?!!..
after that he left the place in a taxi..
taxi man:
-where about?
-take me to 'Heavenlydoor'..
..............................
( In the story Heavenlydoor is a place with no law and authority also no currency is acceptable and no person is claimed to be superior to that place with no facilities only nature is the gift to that place with lots of edibles to live
and said to be able to break the human laws and will become superior power and immortal as written in rock plate at Heavenlydoor gateway; This place is said to be guarded by angels only few people has ever gone by passing their deadly test..
Nobody are known to be familiar with the test living outside from Heavenlydoor except the only guy who managed to escape from Heavenlypunishemnt(which is death penalty if test was failed) and managed to written about the test in a crypted way on the painting while he was ill and kept in secret after death which is somehow managed to be robbed by a guy while he is drunken and that guy is our dr.licker ,he is a linguistic professor. )
...................
a cop is gathered information on this and tend to steal it from dr.licker but before he is so happy about this thing and drank too much alcohol and rest is above..
---------painting hunters----------
mr.broomstick is the leader of the group who tried to stole the painting before but failed since it was too late, this painting is already stolen.
This team got mad on themselves and cried then tried to find who is the guy fried their plan to fail. blunder women along piggy and smugy are team mates of this group. Their unhappy faces makes a group of emojis similar to unrealistic death of zombies .
--------------Cop's temper-----------
-oh crab , what the spell i have done.
Ran towards the enquiry area ..
- rno.240 the person was not there where is he?tell me quick!
-calm down sir,I'm not quick I'm bow
-I don't care who are you I'm a cop I need that information it's urgent.
-okay mr.cop let me check..
-argh..hm look it faster.
after few seconds.....
-I'm sorry mr.cop I don't see any information regarding urgent.
-are you skidding me? I'm asking where is the guy who has to be there in rno.240 .
-he is no more in rno.240 sir.
-I know that! you gummy where is he gone.
-outside mr.cop.. and I'm not a thief stop shouting on me .
cop takes sometime and with less eager asks bow
-can I see your manager ?
-give me a second.
-yes mr.cop what can i do for you?
-I need the information who stayed in your hotel at rno.240 last night and where is he left.
-I'm sorry we don't give our customer details it's confidential.
-im a cop! the person who stayed last night here in rno.240 is a thief and you should be giving the details to me!
-I'm going to need proof for that mr?
-leafblower. and here is my id.
-hm okay.
few seconds later ...
-he is dr.licker and blah blah blah ....
and ...he has gone in a private taxi we don't have the information where he headed.
-(sighs)do you have footage of it so I could see taxi number atleast.
-wait no need we have written it down for our hotel customer safety policy ,infact we do take care of customers in many ways for ensuring satisfaction and safety of customer is top priority.
-good. let me see it..
-okay sir. here take it.
-(sighs (finally)) thank you.
he with that leaves the hotel to find him he asks the control department to trace of this taxi.
------------unusual_incidents----------
an angel is cursed to lose its immortality because of its bad behaviour,it's vital powers are to control air. Angel imabad is born with this power so loosing it's immortality does not affect its powers.(All angels can sense things going on even far away. )because of bad behaviour of imabad it's divinity lost and not of a big difference to humans except to the powers it's posses.
-jamn it!. There must be someway to get back my immortality. oh wait! there is one I have to drink the divine lake's water. then I will be back to normal. since I have cursed I can't go to heavens... How? I have heard there is a divine lake on earth in Heavenlydoor,
ugh, those worthless people ...
(sighs greedly )
-Heavenlydoor I'm coming!!.
-------------cruelReality---------------
(car engine is running..)
piggy:-
I'm telling you, this guys should be pros.We can't fight a pro!, to get that painting we should have a master plan..
blunder:-
oh! please. Last time we had a plan to steal this painting which took almost a year.
mr.broom:-
that's because we had to find out where this painting is kept,It's different to our plan of how to steal it.
smugy:-
yeah,but piggy is right we have no weapons either to fight them.
mr.broom:-
don't worry, we are going to get some weapons.
smugy:-
when?
blunder:-
he said we are going, gummy!it means now.
piggy:-
I have a bad feeling about this! this going to get ugly.
** **
penny:-the vehicle is going towards south east sir..
leafblower:-
thanks penny, you are a real help everytime.
penny:-
it's my job sir..
he then ends the call ..
leafblower:-
nobody is going to save you from me dr.licker. Nobody! I'm going to shoot you away after getting the painting.
Time to get real serious!.
(with lots of ammunition he gets in the car and chase toward him.)
** **
meanwhile angel imabad will travel through a portal towards earth,and he reaches the earth.Almost midnight in a middle of city at a corner.
imabad:-
so this is earth looks like. So smelly.
I have to find a way to reach the Heavenlydoor.
--''
during the punishment the curse also cut off his wings from his body so he can't possibly fly.
"--
walking on the road imabad has no traffic sense so he walks straight to a car moving towards him .
taxi man stops the car with full power.
taximan:-
hey you! don't you see the taxi coming, move away.
-" angel sees him abruptly stares at him staying still. "-
taximan:-
you custard!!
-" taximan steps out of taxi and walks towards him and unknowingly feels fear by seeing a giant personality of angel almost 10feets standing in front of him "-
taximan:-
what the!.
-" angel holds his head like a rugby ball and reads his mind to find out how they do all stuff then he crushes his head and walks away "-
-"
imabad uses his powers and helps himself to reach the place "-
he confronts a tall entrance and by walking in about a mile he sees a portal type visual smog in front of him with a guardian statue on the right side tops a height of over 18 feets .
the angel about few steps away from gateway then a male voice starts stating: if you need to cross me one must sacrifice his own true scent to me.
the angel understands the language of the voice has been stated,since he is an angel.
he still don't care about it and moves towards crossing the guardian angel ..
A strong force stops him to not go through and slowly the statue becomes alive .
guardian angel:-
you are forbidden to enter gateway suffer the Heavenlypunsihment.
-" moves his sword to the angel. "-
imabad backs up and shocked by this angels presence which is one of strong among them.
imabad:-
I'm show you what I'm capable of ,you worthless..
imabad uses his power of air but this will has no effect on the angel.
then imabad draws his weapon. It's a double side axe with thunder summoning magic encrypted on it.
-" they starts fighting for a while releasing high amount of sound near, like a thunder "-
after a frightening fight imabad gets weaken because he is a mortal.
afraid of his death he managed to ran away once he crosses the 1 mile distance back to the entrance the guardian angel stops chasing him vanishes.
imabad sighs of being tired.
imabad:-
(he caught 's a signal out of air that of a man who might has a way to get in and coming towards there )
hmm (sighs briefly).
(he laughs a little bit as a short smile of confidence.)
----------TheChase-------------
Bushmaker:-anything else ?
Mr.broom:- it's more than enough.
Bushmaker:- you know,.These weapons are like childrens to me.Take a good care of them.
Mr.broom:- in that case, give me extra ammunition. They are too hungry everytime.
Bushmaker:- thanks for buying and make sure you get the spell out of here before i use one on you.
Mr.broom:- alright.
(Mr.broom will load weapons in trunk and gets in the car)
Piggy:-where to go?
Mr.broom:- to the Heavenlydoor.
(Mr.broom starts driving.!broom!!broom!.)
Penny:- sir taxi is heading towards hill bridge.
Cop:- I see this taxi nearby,over.
Cop started chasing dr.licker their speed hit 100 miles per hour ,cop starts firing at the taxi while driving, meanwhile out of nowhere angel imabad jumps on taxi that makes immediate stop of the taxi looking that creature dr.licker will be stunned for second and manages to get down of taxi ands starts running. Back at cop,he brakes and drifts closer to angel imabad that shook the cop freaking himself to immediately fire at angel which will show a little tickling to angel making him angry he tries to grab cop but cop quickly dodges from him and get back to his trunk to take a bigger weapon which is a machine gun.
Already loaded starts firing at angel meanwhile dr.licker tries to escape both maniacs that caught an eye of angel which changes his direction towards dr.licker .Angel running gives a little shake to this bridge which makes a passing by biker fell down nearly hitting dr.licker but making little or no damage to dr.licker by that he grabs the bike after he gives a big cash amount from his pocket to that biker (since he is kind)
Then started driving giving cop time to shoot real load of machine gun directly at him by which angel gets angry and starts focusing on cop running towards cops while cop has no ammunition left, he drops the gun and kick sombody out of a car since this mess made a traffic jam and drives closely to angel and quickly drifts away and rises his speed nearly 150miles per hour..
While this going on same road mr.broom and team will be noticing this scenario and give a boost to their vehicle hitting some vehicles away and road will be cleared to go at full speed for them.
By this going the dr.licker will almost get a melee hit to his car by the angel imabad but he stables his car without a hard time then this cop tries to keep hitting this angel by his pistol by firing bullets at him which gives sometime to speed up for dr.licker .At a close edge near a barricade a drifts will be taken by dr.licker because of the curve of the road this angel slips down the hill falling from a pretty height that could hurt him a little but falls directly on the road which in turn the dr.licker will have to pass by when he gets too close to the angel he will take a quick turn and escapes from him but cop with a top speed hits this angel at his legs which then makes angel to fell onto cars top, to get rid of him he tries to drift him away while this has been happening the team member piggy and blunder starts firing at the angel joining with dr.licker and cop in the scene with this since angel is also mortal now he gets some injuries and fell on the road side giving them time to escape for while and continuing to chase dr.licker this team has no idea what's happening there tries to kick this cops car .Dr.licker will having a freaking out experience he tries his best to escape then angel shows up again this time he uses his powers to get them.By making a tornado with his power makes climate from little cloudy to Too much cloudy that too this tornado clearly passes near to them they will have a hard time to control their vehicles then this angel draws his weapon to use thunder bolt on dr.licker's car just hitting nearby he escapes from this but still makes a great deal of damage to car then turning his car into woods to get safe he droves towards a nearby tunnel which leads to mining area of under ground,the cop and Mr boom driving towards him makes a hit a supporting wood while going in making only one thing that keeps open this tunnel will be closed while all people stuck inside except angel.This mining area is so old that has been in no use for long time.
Angel could not possibly get his way in so he waits outside to see any other way to get in.
Making all the people inside this tunnel cop tries to grab dr.licker and tries to hit him which then stopped by mr.broom and helps dr.licker that gives cop a liilte anger then fights mr.broom then smugy joins him and gives a spear to cop while this happens blunder will shout to stop this madness and to explain themselves to situation to be handled.
--------dr.licker's transformation-----
They found a way out. They took all the remaining guns along ammunition and walks out of the mine tunnel ,With the brightlight confronting them.Looking for him all around they all walk towards Heavenlydoor ...
While entering into entrance they will heard big lousy foot steps closing towards them,that's the angel they all starts firing at him with all they got eventually they are out of ammunition and runs into entrance to hide where the cursed human stones are all over place . Angel starts looking for them meanwhile,.
Mr.broom:-hey jack's back over here. Cop removes his belt and uses as a grapple on ankle of angel and tries to drag with every ounce in his body piggy joins with cop and tries to drag along while angel feels nothing he steps towards mr.broom dragging both of them along. With this happening smugy with his spear at legs works out and angel fells down towards his front while angel trying to stand up blunder with a firm stick starts hitting at angel head repeatedly faster shouting DIE custard! Die..
due to limit reached the remaining is posted on
- A man's journey to immortal extended. -
#next #fiction