Hello, I'm a new writer desiring to learn fast from you.
Please let me know, what emotion does this short 100 word piece evoke from you? Also, comments are welcome.


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Hello mom,

It's the 1st of August and my time...
...my time is almost up.
I'm scared.

The light’s closing in on me, the people know enough already, more than I planned.

They see now, sadly; and lies no longer work.

See how I turned out, a bloodsucking pedophile, but my money saved as many lives. Will they understand?


The voices too are coming.
The dealmakers.
They need more blood than I can supply, I failed.

They're coming mom, I feel them closing in. They'll crush me and I don't want to live to see it.


Your soon-to-die son,
Bill


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