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Be Careful What You Wish For Chpt 6.
Chapter 6:

Alan knelt in the vast, empty darkness, his breath shallow and ragged. The figure—his perfect reflection—stood over him, patient, waiting for the inevitable moment of surrender. Alan’s mind raced, swirling with memories and emotions he could no longer keep straight. His thoughts blurred, mixing past, present, and the bleak now.

Had he really done this? Had he chosen this fate?

The thought gnawed at him, relentless. But deep down, somewhere in the darkest recesses of his mind, he couldn’t deny it. There was something horribly familiar about the emptiness, the silence. The crushing weight of isolation wasn’t new—it had been lurking within him all along, waiting for its moment to consume everything.

But now, confronted by this truth, Alan’s mind rebelled. He couldn’t accept it. He couldn’t accept that this was the end.

“There has to be more,” he whispered, his voice barely audible in the stillness. His hands clenched into fists as he pushed himself to his feet, wobbling but standing.

The figure—his doppelgänger—watched him with that same faint smile, bemused but not surprised. “More? Alan, you created this. You wanted peace, to be free from the world, from its pain. You erased it all.”

Alan shook his head, defiant, though the words hit him like a hammer. “No… I didn’t mean to. I—” He stumbled, his breath coming in short bursts. He was trembling, teetering on the edge of collapse again, but he forced himself to remain upright. “I never wanted this. I never wanted to be… alone.”

The figure’s smile faded, replaced by a look of genuine sorrow. “But that’s the lie, isn’t it? You’ve always been alone, Alan. Even when the world was full of people. You felt it. The loneliness, the emptiness. You thought erasing everything would take away the pain.”

Alan’s heart pounded in his chest. The figure’s words cut deep, echoing things he had tried to bury, to forget. Moments flashed before his eyes—brief, fleeting memories of his life before all of this. The strained relationships, the overwhelming isolation despite being surrounded by people, the sleepless nights filled with dread and sorrow. He had felt lost for so long.

But this? This can’t be the answer.

“I won’t believe it,” Alan said through gritted teeth, shaking his head again. “There’s still time. I can change this. I can—” His voice cracked. “I can bring it all back.”

The figure’s eyes darkened, and its smile returned, this time tinged with something colder, more sinister. “Bring it back? And what then? The pain? The suffering? You’ll go back to that world, Alan, and you’ll be right back where you started. Lost, broken, and alone.”

“No,” Alan breathed, stumbling forward as if he could physically outrun the truth pressing in on him. “I don’t care. I’ll take the pain. I’ll take the world as it was—anything is better than this.”

The figure stepped closer, its presence overwhelming, the shadow of its form blotting out what little light remained. It loomed over Alan, its voice now a low, dangerous whisper. “You can’t escape this, Alan. This is your reality now. There’s no going back. There’s no one left.”

Alan staggered backward, his mind spinning. The weight of the truth, the finality of it, was suffocating. But even as the darkness pressed in on him, he clung to one last shred of hope.

There had to be a way.

He looked up at the figure—his reflection, his shadow—and something inside him snapped. A surge of defiance, of raw determination, flooded through him. He wouldn’t accept this. He wouldn’t let this be the end.

“If I created this,” Alan said slowly, his voice growing stronger with each word, “then I can unmake it.”

The figure’s eyes narrowed, its smile faltering for the first time. “You don’t understand—”

“No,” Alan interrupted, taking a step forward, his resolve hardening. “You don’t understand. If I have the power to destroy everything, then I have the power to bring it back. I can fix this.”

The figure hesitated, its form flickering slightly, as if it were losing its solidity. Alan saw it—the doubt, the uncertainty creeping into his shadow’s features. For the first time, the figure looked…vulnerable.

Alan’s breath steadied, and he felt a strange surge of power within himself. “You’re not real,” he said, his voice firm now. “You’re just a manifestation of my own fears. You don’t control me.”

The figure’s face twisted in anger, its once-calm expression contorting into something darker, more primal. “You think you can control this?” it hissed. “You think you can escape?”

“I know I can.”

With those words, the world around Alan began to tremble. The distorted streets, the flickering buildings, the endless void—all of it wavered, like a mirage being burned away by a harsh light. The figure in front of him snarled, its form rippling, struggling to maintain its hold on him.

“You can’t undo this,” it spat, stepping forward, looming over him once more. “You’re nothing. You’re just a broken man—”

“I am more than that,” Alan cut in, his voice unwavering. “I have to be.”

The ground beneath his feet shook violently, and the figure recoiled, its body flickering like a dying flame. Alan felt the world shifting, felt the power within him surging, and for the first time in what felt like an eternity, he allowed himself to believe that he could change this.

The figure let out a roar of fury, its form dissolving into the air, dissipating like smoke. As it vanished, the darkness that had consumed the world around him began to crack. Shafts of light pierced through the void, and the once-warped landscape began to unravel, piece by piece.

Alan stood in the center of it all, watching as the world he had unwittingly created came undone. The silence was replaced by a growing hum, the distant sound of life returning, of things being rebuilt. The darkness gave way to light, and the emptiness began to fill with color, with motion.

It wasn’t over. Not yet.

The final remnants of the void shattered around him, and with a blinding flash of light, everything fell away.


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Alan opened his eyes, gasping for air. He was lying in the middle of a familiar street, the sky above him blue and cloudless. The buildings around him stood tall, intact. The wind rustled the trees gently, and somewhere in the distance, he could hear the faint sound of a car engine.

He sat up slowly, his heart still racing, his mind reeling from the experience. But as he looked around, the world was no longer empty. He wasn’t alone.

People were walking the streets again, cars drove by, life buzzed around him as if nothing had ever been wrong.

Alan exhaled, his body trembling with relief and exhaustion. He had done it. He had broken free from the nightmare, from the isolation. The world was back.

And as he stood there, watching the bustle of life returning to his town, one thought lingered in his mind.

Had it all been real? Or was it just in his head?

He didn’t know for sure. But one thing was certain: he wasn’t alone anymore.

And that was enough.
© Brian C. Jobe