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unadorned
Half of a day is night
Half of the night, there's light
Then is it night or day
How can we say?
And tell me... is it right?
Oh! Look at that tree
Flowering, fruiting, growing
That yellow amidst the green
Makes it feel clean
And your eyes feel like they are resting!
Oh no! An accident in the road?
What happened? Anyone hurt?
Looking out of the windows
At the lapwings and flamingos
Why didn't they stop and look at the birds?
A challenge put forth by Writco
Saying 'Adjectives are a no-no'
And so you can see
This poem, my entry
Seems to fit the bill, no?
#VividImagination
#noadjectives #writco #unadorned #guy3 #guy3specials
© Guy3
Half of the night, there's light
Then is it night or day
How can we say?
And tell me... is it right?
Oh! Look at that tree
Flowering, fruiting, growing
That yellow amidst the green
Makes it feel clean
And your eyes feel like they are resting!
Oh no! An accident in the road?
What happened? Anyone hurt?
Looking out of the windows
At the lapwings and flamingos
Why didn't they stop and look at the birds?
A challenge put forth by Writco
Saying 'Adjectives are a no-no'
And so you can see
This poem, my entry
Seems to fit the bill, no?
#VividImagination
#noadjectives #writco #unadorned #guy3 #guy3specials
© Guy3
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