What makes a poem great?
Is it only great if it’s something you relate to?
Is it a gift of a beautiful mind?
What determines a good poem?
For instance, is it for you to speak in metaphorical riddles.
my mind and my thoughts are different. I am a product of my environment.
For me to explain myself, it would be a lot different.
My love is a song.
If I’m listening to a certain song while I am with someone my mind incorporates my thoughts with the song.
So if it’s a love song for that moment, I will be in love.
I don’t know actual love.
So this is the only way for me to feel like I’m in love.
It’s almost like my mind fools me and it’s all I know.
I read poems that are descriptive every detail.
How is Breath raises the hairs on your back?
How how you would have goosebumps.
Your nipples will be hard he’ll look in your eyes as he sucks them and ever so gently.
describing the butterflies you feel.
Like teasing you to the point that your body is just trembling.
Your eyes are tearing as you desperately beg him to put himself inside you.
How, he looks in your eyes almost as if he’s looking at your soul.
He doesn’t have to tell you he loves you because you can see it. You can feel it.
he kisses you passionately.
And whispers in your ear how much he loves you.
Telling you how good you feel how he wants to take it slow how much he wants to enjoy you.
He’s looking in your eyes and he says baby you feel so good and pauses he doesn’t want to cum so quick.
he gently pushes your hair out of your face and starts to kiss and slowly continues pushing himself inside of you.
I love you so much baby
So you look at him and say I love you too.
You feel so good good inside me kiss me.
he looks into your eyes and you tell him you love him again, and he kisses you, and he just explodes all his love inside of you, collapses and gazes into your eyes and tells you you are mine.
Is that poetic.
I know he does but to me it’s just a song.
Is this descriptive?
this is my mind, and how it works.


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