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Touched by an Angel🌻
#WritcoPoemPrompt77
What are the things that a loving God would do? Write a poem concerning this question.
I remember that one night,
knees planted into the carpet,
hands clasped together,
facelifted into the heavens,
with my eyelids gently closed
Tears streamed down my cheeks,
I felt intense anguish,
"God, I need you. I cannot live like this anymore, I am tired. I am tired of myself. Forgive me for my sins. Help me, I give You my life.."
A few seconds of silence
Felt like an embrace had come around me,
I couldn't see Him but He was there,
inside the room with me
Pain was replaced with peace,
Low self-esteem was replaced with God-confidence,
Fear replaced with boldness
Walked on ground yet felt like I was floating
For the first time I felt free from negative intrusive thoughts
Sin had lost its grip on me
Feeling dirty...gone
Feeling useless...gone
Feeling like the world would be a better place without me was crushed... by Him
It didn't matter how I looked anymore,
if God had seen that it was good,
who was I to hate His creation,
I felt like I was fresh out of the womb,
the world was new,
I saw it differently
I was born again
I was never the same
Problems where there but saw life differently
I was made new
© Zine
What are the things that a loving God would do? Write a poem concerning this question.
I remember that one night,
knees planted into the carpet,
hands clasped together,
facelifted into the heavens,
with my eyelids gently closed
Tears streamed down my cheeks,
I felt intense anguish,
"God, I need you. I cannot live like this anymore, I am tired. I am tired of myself. Forgive me for my sins. Help me, I give You my life.."
A few seconds of silence
Felt like an embrace had come around me,
I couldn't see Him but He was there,
inside the room with me
Pain was replaced with peace,
Low self-esteem was replaced with God-confidence,
Fear replaced with boldness
Walked on ground yet felt like I was floating
For the first time I felt free from negative intrusive thoughts
Sin had lost its grip on me
Feeling dirty...gone
Feeling useless...gone
Feeling like the world would be a better place without me was crushed... by Him
It didn't matter how I looked anymore,
if God had seen that it was good,
who was I to hate His creation,
I felt like I was fresh out of the womb,
the world was new,
I saw it differently
I was born again
I was never the same
Problems where there but saw life differently
I was made new
© Zine
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